300 Words
The Royal Wedding
Hundreds of guests sat in rows and rows,
in the ancient hall, wearing their finest clothes,
but one pony stood, striking a pose,
as the Princesses arrived, dressed from flank to nose.
Celestia led her sister up the aisle,
looking regal, walking with style,
on her face she wore a sunny smile,
because her sister had found happiness; it had taken a while!
Luna was an incredible sight,
simply divine in her dress of white,
contrasting perfectly with her coat of night,
although it would have made for an impractical flight.
But all the guests could do naught but stare,
at the groom who had been her own 'best mare'.
The Great and Powerful Trixie awaited a bride so fair,
that even she made an effort to look debonair.
Trixie had used the best plan she could devise,
to keep the Princess firmly under her guise,
and nopony had taken the time to realise,
that there was no sparkle behind Luna’s eyes.
The band started playing, the choir got their cue,
the voice of three young fillies suddenly grew,
competing with the sound of the trumpets that blew,
trying their best to completely outdo!
Enthusiasm, those girls certainly did not lack,
they got even louder, having found the knack,
the guests felt their ears had come under attack,
and Luna's engagement ring began to crack...
Noticing the jewel, Trixie grew scared,
that spell had worked better than she ever dared,
but as it fell apart, its magic flared,
perhaps if she fled now she would be spared...
As her mind became free of its encroaching gloom,
Luna rounded upon her cowering groom.
Her eyes blazed with an indignant doom,
and her voice rang out with a cracking boom:
"Oh you are SO banished to the moon."
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That was so awesome!
That took me by surprise!
Holy crap, man, that was fantastic! 5 stars all the way!
Fucking awsome! But wouldn't Luna banish to the sun?
This was amazing. Nice work~
Very nice, I don't usually like poetry stories, but this one was very well done.
Definetely 5 stars.
You did a GREAT job with this poetry story.
This is great fun -- Trixie using her tricks on Luna!
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Thank you!
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Sneaky story is sneaky.
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Thanks bro.
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The Moon is a universal naughty-step.
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Glad you like it.
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You laughed? Excellent!
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Keeping to within 300 words was the tricky bit. I actually had to remove the formatting tags because FiMFiction counts them as words.
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Thanks!
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That's great!
This deserves so many more views than it has...
Trixi you silly pony
10679 it wouldn't rhyme
Nice, it was really good.
nice rhiyming, good story
the whole time i was imagining it being told by zecora.
Not bad.
I feel that in some places you sacrificed the meaning slightly to make the words rhyme.
However since it's for a competition, suppose I could turn the other way.
The ending was a suprise; all in all, it's a fun read.
Awsome! You'd better be proud of yourself!
Lol!
someone has done a dramatic read of this fan-fic
300 words. Amazing. Poetry.
Sometimes short is better. Or rather, a lot of times.
I love it!
And Trixie then experienced gloom;
for her there was no honeymoon.
Rocks and dust she had seen much,
But not another pony she could touch.
Until before the dawn of the longest day,
The stars would help her find a way.
Then she'll sing a different tune,
Swears the repentant Lulamoon.
Wow.
That is impressive, author..
Not usually one for poetry, but this was very cute
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Although I am a little confused, as far as I was aware, Fimfiction has a baseline of 1k words for a story, so how does this work?
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I think there was no 1,000 minimum word limit in the olden days of fimfiction
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Hmm...maybe new thing then?
First non-Zecora related poem I've read on fimfiction but very nice nonetheless.
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Nice poem, fits nicely with the story!