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If you haven't guessed, this story is meant to be bad. If you guys like it, I'll revise it and make it better. But I originally wrote this because I was bored.
The Mane 6 get turned into fillies due to a spell gone wrong. Twilight has a minor mental breakdown. Hilarity ensues.
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Not bad but the wall of text is a problem. Also, that Doctor Whooves reference was really sudden. Maybe too sudden.
And age regression fics are hardly rare. Needless to say this fic isn't doing much to stand out among the dozens of other entries. I would recommned picking up an editor, or a proofreader.
This could be interesting, provided you can make it stand out.
Basically what guy below said.
Less cancer.
Eh, you got a like out 'a me.
3946975 Thanks, this story was more of a test to see how publishing worked. Do you know any good editors and proofreaders that I can work with?
do you plan on continuing this because i think its great.
4035679 Sure, Thanks for liking it.
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More chapters please
i like this story is there going to be more???
Hope to see more soon. And Spike and Zecora have to care for the fillys ? I hope so, t be funny to see them act like an old marry couple!