When possible, it sure is nice to see a couple ponies be murdered by Tumblr (literally and metaphorically) and write down the inspiration from it.
Fever Hallucinations can make any situation seem reasonable. Even knife juggling, or jumping off the top of second story house in hopes there is a soft spot at the bottom. When Snowdrop is diagnosed with scarlet fever a strange pony with the well-earned name "Mr.Widemouth" appears, "entertaining" her as she recovers. But soon it is found her new-found aquantince is more than a simple dream, much less a friend...
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Snowdrop really should be a listed character in the description editor...
I listened to somebody read Mr. Widemouth on Youtube. Cry, is his name.... It wasn't scary, but it was errie and had a chilling ending. Because of that, I will read this.... Always good when people ponfiy creepy pastas (or whatever you would classify this story as)
Keep up the good work...
You get a full review once I actually read it
You have the start of a wonderful story.... just the huge wall of text make it hard to flow..
You should always, always make a new line when somepony (or something
) new is talking.
I am not a huge editor... I barely know what I am doing but I do know the basics...
Space out, make a new line for a new speaker and then you have yourself a good story based on one of my favorite scary stories
Spacing my brother, spacing.
Generally skipping a line in between speakers is good practice, also in between paragraphs will help make it more visually coherent.
Kinda like what I've done here.
3454000 ...Please don't promote yourself here (if that was indeed what you were doing.) Thanks for the input, anyways.
When will the next chapter be out? I'm loving this!
3830444 You're... you're WHAT now??
I really enjoyed this story, though i would suggest promoting this story in a creepypasta group