- Member Since 14th Apr, 2012
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Zytharros
Let the child inside alive. Leave all who would slay them far behind.
Zytharros
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You should probably add Fallout Equestria (or some variation of FoE) to the title. I almost missed this one.
I like this so far
While your writing quality is quite good, I'm honestly finding it very difficult to empathize with the main character. Aside from a slightly numb sense of horror, she doesn't seem to have much emotional width or depth.
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There's a purpose behind that, actually... It'll be addressed.
I think she went crazy
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She just went from numb sense of horror (shock) to someplace that she can now start to deal with what's happened in one conversation.
POP!