Life was never easy in the failing stable 79. But the ponies who lived inside never even thought there could be another way. One pony inside learns that some doors should never be opened...
So, the second chapter is up! I also fixed a logic error in chapter 1, so.... yay!
I kind have released the second chapter without a final run through with my new editor... but he's been busy for the past several days. I will probably be fixing the chapter shortly after his grand return!
Yay a new chapter and he came back to life but at least he isn't a ghoul, since their souls are bound forever does that mean Lily will be going out into the Wastes with him?. Good chapter again, looking forwards towards the next .
3252859 Heh, well yes. I also have nothing against ghouls, but I didn't want Shadow to have the regenerative abilities of one. I have..... other plans.
well, with this added twist of seeing and fighting ghosties he will most likely encounter some interesting enemies and challenges outside the stable, yay for something that isnt the usual
Two things.... One: Thought the song was a little familiar. Two: This is just fucking strange, but that good strange. I'll definitely read more. I also think that Shadow has the Wild Wasteland trait. Because... well, pretty much Death-himself just showed up out of nowhere.
3254928 Well, yea! I'm not a song writer. I can write lyrics to a pre-existing song... I might try something in the future.
And of course Shadow has the Wild Wastelands trait! I don't think I could write a Fo:E fic without it! Although.... He isn't death himself... A lot is yet to be revealed about our Doctor~
To Everypony: Thank you all for your love and kindness! I hope I can continue to entertain in the future~
12:59 * Retl made it to the tail end of Broken Soul chapter 2. It's different. Focus seems to be primarily on uh. Metaphysical realm? I dunno. But it's still in the FoE universe. All in all, it's neat, and I need to go flail at their fimfiction page in a bit.
-- Very weird. Very different. Had a few laughs here and there. I like it, and I'm interested in seeing where this goes from here.
So, the second chapter is up! I also fixed a logic error in chapter 1, so.... yay!
I kind have released the second chapter without a final run through with my new editor... but he's been busy for the past several days. I will probably be fixing the chapter shortly after his grand return!
Yay a new chapter and he came back to life but at least he isn't a ghoul, since their souls are bound forever does that mean Lily will be going out into the Wastes with him?. Good chapter again, looking forwards towards the next .
3251997 To answer where this is going simply....
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...Take that as you will.
Well this is a quite a twist, glad to see him not all ghoulie, not that i have a problem with ghouls...
Totally looking forward to the next chapter~
3252859 Heh, well yes. I also have nothing against ghouls, but I didn't want Shadow to have the regenerative abilities of one. I have..... other plans.
well, with this added twist of seeing and fighting ghosties he will most likely encounter some interesting enemies and challenges outside the stable, yay for something that isnt the usual
Interesting twist and better yet a deal with a mysterious figure locked away for the (likely) good of all pony kind... yay!
Two things....
One: Thought the song was a little familiar.
Two: This is just fucking strange, but that good strange. I'll definitely read more. I also think that Shadow has the Wild Wasteland trait. Because... well, pretty much Death-himself just showed up out of nowhere.
3253119 Yus! I had to make something different!
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3254928 Well, yea! I'm not a song writer. I can write lyrics to a pre-existing song... I might try something in the future.
And of course Shadow has the Wild Wastelands trait! I don't think I could write a Fo:E fic without it! Although.... He isn't death himself... A lot is yet to be revealed about our Doctor~
To Everypony: Thank you all for your love and kindness! I hope I can continue to entertain in the future~
Seriously, that was all I could think for that moment!
Caught a couple of error, myself, though:
But I am here to say that is completely
anabsurd!and
[center should have a closing bracket.
Otherwise, bravo!
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3255064 Hehehehehe
And the 'an' is there because while he wasn't exactly singing at the time, the extra syllable there makes it more of a sing-songy sentence.
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Ah, gotcha, then.
12:59 * Retl made it to the tail end of Broken Soul chapter 2. It's different. Focus seems to be primarily on uh. Metaphysical realm? I dunno. But it's still in the FoE universe. All in all, it's neat, and I need to go flail at their fimfiction page in a bit.
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Very weird. Very different. Had a few laughs here and there. I like it, and I'm interested in seeing where this goes from here.