The Return of Sunset Shimmer

by Rosebud_teh_Pegasus

Chapter 2 Advice

The bell rang and school was finally out. Sunset Shimmer walked out of her last class. Everybody avoided Sunset Shimmer. Some rolled their eyes, some gave her a scowl, other just stayed complately out of her way. She waved to Snips and Snails in the hallway and even they didn't talk to her! She just avoided eveyone's mean gazes and walked to the parking lot in the front of the school. She hopped in her car and drove to Rarity's Boutique.

I wonder what they'll say about me returning to Equestria. I mean we finally forgave each other and it'd seem a bit wrong to just leave. I don't know. I finally have some friends and then I have to leave them to risk not being liked by anypony in Equestria. Or maybe I'll become a princess in Equestria just liike Twilight... that'd be really nice. I do need to learn a little more about the magic of friendship though. And I'm a little rusty on my magic skills. Well if I go I know that Princess Celestia won't nbe cruel and most likely take me under her wing... again. Oh I sure hope so.

Before long she arrived at the boutique. The others were already there. Rarity was fitting a flowery dress to Fluttershy. They all looked up when the bell on top of the door rang.

"Howdy, Sunset!"

"Hey!"

"Hello"

"Hi!"

"Hey, Sunset Shimmer!" The girls said at the same time.

"Hey everybody!" Sunset Shimmer said happily. She looked at the dress that Fluttershy was getting fitted into. "Nice dress!"

"And done!" Rarity said. She sat down on a chair tiredly.

"So... um guys..... I was thinking about moving back to Equestria. I mean, I feel as if I don't belong here anymore. Nobody is giving me a second chance -except you guys- no matter how many times I've apologized. I mean I've apologized to everyone in school at least three times this week. Even Snips and Snails avoid me!"

"Well you did turn them into evil, demony, dragon type things!" Pinkie Pie said.

"SHHH!" Everbody looked at Pinkie Pie angrily.

"WHAT?! Just saying."

Rarity rolled her eyes. "Do, please, continue."

"So I was hoping that you guys could give me some advice on whether I should go or not. I really don't feel comfotable in this world anymore but I just got my first friends ever. I don't want to abandon that because the ponies back in Equestria probably won't even like me. I mean the story has got to be all over Equestria by now. I'm afraid that once I return that they won' except me just like here. I mean everyone here has a pony parallel... so they basically have the same personality which means that nine time out of ten they won't forgive me. I just don't understand what I should do!"

"Well I think you should just do whatever you think will make you more comfortable, sugarube. It seems to me that you should return to Equestria, though. Not because I don't like you, I do, but it sounds to me like your life here is miserable." Applejack said.

"Maybe you should go I mean I think it's worth to put the fact that the ponies won't like you anymore on the line and take that chance." Rarity said.

"Yeah what happened didn't even happen in their WORLD!" Rainbow Dash agreed."

"AndTwlightSparkleprobablydidn'tgoaroundallofponyworldtellingthemabouthowshedefeatedascarydemon-dragon thingie-mobbobertorescuehermagicalelement." Pinkie Pie sad really fast.

"QUIET PINKIE PIE!" Rainbow Dash and Rarity said in unison. Rarity walked away browsing the store.

"Well, um I think you should also go because you don't seem very happy here, but I would be totally fine if you stayed here with us." Fluttershy said softly.

Sunset Shimmer looked thoughtful. They are sorta right. Maybe I shall return. Maybe I'll become a Princess. Maybe nopony knows about what happened in human world. Maybe...... "I think I'll go back to Equestia. The ponies there would probably treat me kindly- I'm not saying that you guys don't- I can start new because the ponies there don't really know me, well except for Twilight but yeah it sonds like a good idea." She said to the four that were sitting in front of her.

"Well then I guess you won't be needing these." Rairty held up a yellow and red dress with a half red and helf yellow sun and a pair of sun earrings to match."

"Maybe I could take it with me to remember you guys."

"Or you could take a picture with us... or both. Ijustgotthisawesomenewcamerawithspecialeffects..."

"PINKIE!"

Comments

[Alesiopdv]

I like it. Hope Sunset is well recieved in Equestria.
I think you need a proofreader but I´m not the guy for that job. Ask around and someone will point you to an editor.

[PinkPearl]

fast pace...very much so. not many details. seems mostly like a filler. no real point to it other than her going back to equestria and theres no goal to the story as far as i can hear.

[Ducati]

Very fine story there pardner! I will be keepin' a eye out. I left some graditude for yah' and it is looking like I'm your first follower stranger!

[Rosebud_teh_Pegasus]

3169963 yeah I do know it was rushed but I do believe that I told you that I was writing as I was typing.

[DarthWill3]

Could use a little rewrite, but on the whole, it's so cool!
Need I say that Sunset will need all the courage and support her new friends will give her.
Pinkie, you're almost useless...