• Member Since 10th Nov, 2012
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Mandalore the Inept


I'm a person who happens to watch a show about talking pastel ponies and enjoys it. And occasionally writes stories about them.

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Blazing "Blaze" Glory is a busy stallion. He's a single father who works early hours dealing with bruised egos and late hours with bruised bodies. When his daughter gets her cutie mark in a near death situation, Blaze forces himself and by extension, his subordinates, to work at such a grueling rate that his employers force him to take a vacation in order to cool off. Learning that they will have two weeks to spend together, Fluttershy wishes to bond with her busy body father. Deciding to make her father breakfast in bed for the first day, Fluttershy notices a dusty old maroon beret hiding in the pantry. Figuring that it must have belonged to her father, the filly puts it on, intending on returning it. Little does she know that the beret would bring forth the story of her father's life.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Please write more,
You really caught my interest with this story. I love it. Please make more chapters.
This is so well writen, The grammar, The plot, and PANCAKES.
I would sincerly hate too see such a materpiece like this go without even living. Please make more.
~Windchester

The cuteness it's too much. I must read moar.

The writing of this story is impressive better than mine actually, the grammar and spelling mistake are rare and you know what no more complaints I like and fav it.

(If you did the editing and proofreading yourself then man write a book not a fanfic a real book.)

3164403
Glad you like it.
And while I did edit and proofread this myself, I will not make a book. It would be way too meta and self depreciative.

3164261
I'll try my best sir.

Thank God! I thought this story was abandon. Please continue:pinkiehappy:

Checking in:

I'm real, real sorry I haven't updated in a while. The combination of school, scholarships, and general laziness (and Steam) have caused me to neglect my story far too much. I have been writing more chapters, but for now I will not release them until I feel they are ready. I really should have put the hiatus status on a long time ago. Once again, my apologies.

-Mandalore the Inept

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