Okay for Rainbow maybe a better one would be Achroma Burst, Achroma means lack of color, and for Scootaloo maybe......... I don't know what Nightmare name for her except Wrath. Just plain Wrath since that's how she would feel after everything that happened with her in her old life.
Darkaloo sounds a bit funny. But what else can you do with a name like Scootaloo? Anyhow, this was an interesting chapter. The foalcon isn't really my thing but I did like the way Fluttershadow used her newfound powers of manipulation.
5081408 I busted a gut or two laughing at that horrendous name. Seriously, fucking Darkaloo? Juts give her a name like "quicksilver" or something, anything is better than Darkaloo at this point. Other than that name, every other name is actually really cool.
I'm with the others, Darkaloo is a bit... silly. I recommend having the other NEC (Nightmare Empire Crusaders) point this out. As for a better name... How about Shadow Wing? After all, the darkness gave her the power of flight!
First of all, I am so that Scootaloo has joined that I can't even properly express it, because I was worried she wouldn't which would have been because she wouldn't be with her friends. Second, I checked out the various Nightmare forms of characters online, and wrote down the names I thought worked best, whether from others or myself, and the one I have for Scootaloo (I thought of this one) is Daring Whirlwind, cause she's a bit of daredevil compared to her friends and I always thought the power of evil would grant her flight, I admit it could be more menacing. Anyone feel free to ask me the other Corrupted/Nightmare names, I even have ones for some of the background ponies.
While "Children of the Night" is a fairly impressive animation, "Come Little Children" comes from an excellent movie of the 90's: Hocus Pocus. The lyrics were modified somewhat, but it's still obvious what song it is.
This how I believe the fight between Twilight and her friends will be like.
But instead of dying she gets captured. Her reinforcements are Celestia and Luna and she isn't protecting a human. And also tries to convert her friends back to the good side and doesn't kill any of them. (Also take out the factory scene and start at the forest.)
"I...wow, is this me? I feel...so coooool." She then looked at her new strong wings, feeling tears start to come to her eyes, tears of pure joy. "My wings...I...I think with these I can finally fly..." With that, she soared into the air...and she was flying. The filly who thought she'd never fly in her whole life, was flying. She cried out in unbelievable elation, filling as if a void in her heart had finally been filled. After zooming around at great speeds for a minute, she landed back down, the widest and most happy grin on her face, racing up to Fluttershadow and giving her a big hug, sniffling against her chest. "Thank you Fluttershy...I don't think I could thank you enough."
this is a rare example of outright evil actually being heartwarming...or is that just me?
Also, I've retired Daring Whirlwind, and I then replaced it with Sharpwing, but I'm thinking maybe I should change that too, jeez, I thought coming up with a name for Nightmare Pinkie Pie was tough, (groans).
I can't wait to see what will happen to Sweetie Belle, my mind is filling with so many possibilities. One of them, oddly enough, being Nightmare Rarity being chewed out by her sister, then comforting her as she denies any possibility of her turning back to good and explains her motives in a more sympathetic way...
8077092 Had to put it on temporary Hiatus for a bit, but you'll be happy to know that the newest chapter is actually almost done. It just needs to be edited a little.
And then there was one.
Remind me once again what happened to Spike?
Darkaloo I just cant deal with... sounds utterly ridiculous
Okay for Rainbow maybe a better one would be Achroma Burst, Achroma means lack of color, and for Scootaloo maybe......... I don't know what Nightmare name for her except Wrath. Just plain Wrath since that's how she would feel after everything that happened with her in her old life.
5081408 Umbraloo?
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Gotta agree, it's rather silly.
Darkaloo sounds a bit funny. But what else can you do with a name like Scootaloo?
Anyhow, this was an interesting chapter. The foalcon isn't really my thing but I did like the way Fluttershadow used her newfound powers of manipulation.
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I busted a gut or two laughing at that horrendous name. Seriously, fucking Darkaloo? Juts give her a name like "quicksilver" or something, anything is better than Darkaloo at this point. Other than that name, every other name is actually really cool.
Just...
Fucking Darkaloo.
I'm with the others, Darkaloo is a bit... silly. I recommend having the other NEC (Nightmare Empire Crusaders) point this out. As for a better name... How about Shadow Wing? After all, the darkness gave her the power of flight!
Shadoloo
First of all, I am so that Scootaloo has joined that I can't even properly express it, because I was worried she wouldn't which would have been because she wouldn't be with her friends. Second, I checked out the various Nightmare forms of characters online, and wrote down the names I thought worked best, whether from others or myself, and the one I have for Scootaloo (I thought of this one) is Daring Whirlwind, cause she's a bit of daredevil compared to her friends and I always thought the power of evil would grant her flight, I admit it could be more menacing. Anyone feel free to ask me the other Corrupted/Nightmare names, I even have ones for some of the background ponies.
That song is not an original work!
While "Children of the Night" is a fairly impressive animation, "Come Little Children" comes from an excellent movie of the 90's: Hocus Pocus. The lyrics were modified somewhat, but it's still obvious what song it is.
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The 'Come little children' part reminded me of Hypno's Lullaby. Mostly because they both started with come little children.
How about shadowloo i mean it's sounds a lot better than darkoloo
5223478 That's what I was thinking. Straight outta Street Fighter. Sort of.
This how I believe the fight between Twilight and her friends will be like.
But instead of dying she gets captured. Her reinforcements are Celestia and Luna and she isn't protecting a human. And also tries to convert her friends back to the good side and doesn't kill any of them.
(Also take out the factory scene and start at the forest.)
Hi, me again, I realize, looking over this scene,
this is a rare example of outright evil actually being heartwarming...or is that just me?
Also, I've retired Daring Whirlwind, and I then replaced it with Sharpwing, but I'm thinking maybe I should change that too, jeez, I thought coming up with a name for Nightmare Pinkie Pie was tough, (groans).
Finish this story! I need to see the end.
Is this story dead?
I can't wait to see what will happen to Sweetie Belle, my mind is filling with so many possibilities. One of them, oddly enough, being Nightmare Rarity being chewed out by her sister, then comforting her as she denies any possibility of her turning back to good and explains her motives in a more sympathetic way...
6843537 Even when she becomes pure evil, I'll bet that she will look darling. How does Princess Sour Note sound for her new name?
Please continue the story.
7278202 That sounds good. Although what do you think of Deceptive Aria? That was the name I came up with
7278226 Sound nice. When are you going to continue the story?
7278478 Ummm..., I'm not the writer...
7278656 Sorry.
7278742 S'alright..a little flattering actually
Please make more.
Can you do more please
When is this story going to continue? It's been over a year since the last update on this.
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Had to put it on temporary Hiatus for a bit, but you'll be happy to know that the newest chapter is actually almost done. It just needs to be edited a little.
8077218 yay
Please finish this its been two years please
When is there gonna be more?