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alexmagnet


There are only three real monsters: Dracula, Blackula, and Son of Kong.

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Trixie, after returning to Ponyville seeking revenge/forgiveness/redemption/bus fare back to Hoofington, winds up in a coma for three months, through no fault of her own. When she wakes up, she's a little concerned by the hole in the ceiling and the one next to the bed, but not enough to really do much investigating. At least, not until she runs into Rainbow Dash who tells her Twilight has gone missing. Then, things get even weirder when Spike comes crawling out of the basement talking about mysterious books and milk and whatnot. Clearly Trixie has no other option than to get to the bottom of things. She just never expected where that bottom would be.

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Well. THAT happened.

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I still enjoyed it...

~Skeeter The Lurker

I... I don't even, Alex.

This was great! :pinkiehappy:

3161747
I try...

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Don't question it. Just let the 'what' flow.

Truly a great work of our generation.

I had never read any of the books from back there, and in fact I didn’t even know it existed until I accidentally knocked some books over and found it hidden behind the anthropology section.

Not the 'hippology' section? :trixieshiftright:

one of the more cohesive stories on this site.

Well okay then...

Too much "Random" and not enough "Comedy" for my taste, I'm afraid.

I can now easily imagine Sarumon gawking around at the Ent attack and retreating from his balcony thinking, "Hm, you know what? I, um...left the oven on. Gotta go!"

From now on, this is a ‘no-skim zone’.”

Ah, so that's why she got two percent! Clever girl.

Even from an author who clearly likes Spike and treats him well in the bulk of their stories, Spike abuse is still irritating unless it's as goofy and ridiculous as intellectually possible. Ri2 says she likes Spike just fine, yet her stories still piss me off a little. This fandom's continuous dismissal of him has all but conditioned me to hate Spike abuse in all forms. Still, this story was gold, as usual. Naturally, I give it the upvote and fave that it - and everything else you write - deserves.

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I'm not sure why, but in every "comedy" I write, I feel the need to make fun of Spike. I actually really like him, like you pointed out, but I guess he's just an easy target. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. It was just a random idea I came up with while struggling to crap out the newest chapter of Letters.

3176150 Yeah, I get how you feel; a year or ago, the same thing would've befallen Spike in one of my stories. I personally feel that the mild tension Spike abuse creates in me can be released if he gets some kind of payoff that fits in with the comedy - I was hoping he would punch all four ponies in one swipe at the end of his story, like Indiana Jones did with those two tugs while escaping the Coronado.

Ri2

3174407 'She?' I'm a guy.

6137516 No, you are not. The Swash has spoken.

Ri2

6139947 I think I'd know if I was a guy or not.

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