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Bookish Delight


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If there are three things Principal Celestia can't stand, it's paperwork, princesses and her past. Unfortunately, the first makes up her job... and she desperately needs the second to help her resolve the last.

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Well Bookish... I think this is the first EqG fic I've seen that has Principle Celestia, and I think you did good on this, and created a lot of questions about the nature of the EqG world.., which I'm guess you made not our world and definitely in Pawtucket, Rhode Island.

Well. This was a fun read.

But... Is it over? Or is there going to be more...?

~Skeeter The Lurker

I have two words for you. Just two.
Sequel. Now.

This was very interesting but I noticed it marked complete! Awww I wanna know what the heck is going on...although I have my own suspicions lol good job

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Seconded.
So, Celestia was planning to turn Shimmer in Human Equestria┬┤s Bearer of Magic al along?

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Praise from Caesar is praise indeed! Thanks so much!

And definitely Rhode Island. I wish there were pink and purple girls in our world! Do you know what I'd do? :rainbowlaugh:

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Crap.. forgot to put in a 'not', it's not in Rhode Island... wonder how many would many would get the comment about Rhode Island. Since you don't write clop I would say you would just hug them.

Also I am simply a humble paladin

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There's a notebook close by me which contains the headcanon I've slowly been building for the Equestria Girls world for roughly a month now. It's still in (several) bits and pieces -- complete with an, uh, incomplete map -- and I'd really like to turn it into a series.

I don't know if or when that'd officially happen, but this story's a snippet from it. Glad you all like it -- I was on pins and needles the whole time I was typing it out. :twilightsmile:

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Same here, got a text doc going for my notes

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That's how it begins -- needles and pins.

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(Yes, but you're her paladin. Be proud. :raritywink:)

...OH! Yeah I'd probably be the last person to get that joke, sadly. And while I may not write clop, I can skirt around it like nopony's business. :scootangel:

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It wasn't a joke... I think... Pawtucket, Rhode Island is where Hasbro is based.

So you'll glomp them then

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Nice! Can't wait to see what you come up with.

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I'll take the reference as a compliment, then. :raritywink:

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Ain't got much yet, and I thought I would be funny by haven't Canterlot High in the same city as Hasbro

I see I'm not the only one who thought Principal Celestia suddenly seemed really well informed about Twilight's insecurities at the end of EQG. :raritywink:

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Well, nicely done so far! It actually works.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Nope. :raritywink: Srsly dat speech. So wonderful and suspicious.

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Awww, thanks. :twilightsmile:

I think we are united in desiring more.

Well this explains what was up with Principle!Celestia (makes more sense than 'humans are silly').

But seriously, we need to see more! :twilightsmile: And what is up with EG!Twilight.... :duck:

Hey, this is pretty awesome. I've never seen a Principal Celestia fic before. You did a good job. Any chance you'll be continuing this?

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Thanks!

And I think I'm going to try. There appears to be an audience for it!

So...wait...in Equestria, Sunset Shimmer felt betrayed by Princess Celestia...from what I've read, does Twilight feel the same way towards Principle Celestia?

Someone better write a sequel before MY HEAD EXPLODES HERE!!!

Hey, looks like this Twilight is doing pretty well! Good for her. :trollestia:

She took her nearby comb and put it to work, the routine of the procedure and feel of the comb's teeth moving through her locks calming her down somewhat.

I think there might be a Pinklestia joke here? But I can't remember if she actually does love to brush her mane or not.

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She loves it when you do her hair. :D

Hey, looks like this Twilight is doing pretty well! Good for her. :trollestia:

:rainbowlaugh:

Um... the story itself was good, but I'm sorta confused:rainbowhuh:. On everything.:fluttercry: I truly have no idea what I just read, and I read it twice. It was very well written, but I don't know what happened. Maybe a sequel will help:trixieshiftright:

Complete? What do you mean "Complete"? This story's only begun! I guess someone else will have to tell it, though...

Seriously, I hope this isn't the last time you visit this continuity. You've done some very intriguing things here.

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Aww, thanks! As a spur-of-the-moment trial run, this looks like a success! Fortunately this isn't the only story in this world I have to tell. :twilightsmile:

3162701 Here's to hoping we see more. Great start for a spur of the moment story.

Interesting! :raritystarry::pinkiehappy:
I really hope there will be more since I have yet to see a fleshed out believable EqG world fanfic but you seem to be right on top of it! :raritywink:

This feels like a prologue to a larger story. I am guessing that is what it is. Well color me interested.

I agree with Derpy-Insano person. IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS CUDDLY, CONTINUE THIS STORY!

This was a good story. You get a happy Twilight. :twilightsmile:

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Oh those are the best sort of Twilights. :twilightsmile: Thank you!

Hmmmm do I smell a sequel perhaps,:duck: there is indeed a lot of room for one:rainbowhuh:.

human twilight is evil?

Principle Celestia? Very beautiful job. Overlord-Flinx approves. :ajsmug:

Wow, does human Twilight Sparkle a CEO or something? Maybe she won a Noble Prize at a young age? Such honor is truly deserved as to be a princess of Equestria. After all, a Noble Prize isn't something to taken lightly. Principle Celestia truly proud of her ex- student.

A logo of a violet star adorned the skyscraper's summit.
Meaning we're going to need all of the help we can get.

:pinkiegasp:!
Is human Twilight the EqG version of Bruce Wayne?!?!:raritystarry::rainbowkiss:

That ending, heck the entire story calls out for a sequel!!:raritystarry:
Do it filly!:pinkiecrazy:



You know what would have been a pretty bad assed scene that could have taken place during EqG?
Our Twilight and Spike meeting the local Twilight and Spike!:twilightsmile: (Please tell me that someone already did that!)

This pleases me, but a sequel would please me more.

Have a thumb, a fav, and a follow.

Well shit... Twi's evil?! LESSON ZERO ALL OVER AGAIN!!

Ah! So the EqG version of Twilight has fallen into the Dark! So, Sunset will get her revenge in that strange way that Destiny loves on occasion - by leading the Elements of Harmony against this world's Nightmare.

This was a great story. I really hope you expand more on this. Do i sense a evil Twilight?

Oh I like this. I like this a lot. Would love to see it fleshed out more.

Nice :pinkiehappy: I was hoping to see a fic about Principal Celestia sooner or later, and I really liked this one.

The ending was a surprise, I wasn't expecting that.

Good! How about... moar? :twilightsheepish:

This as potential to be an epic story. You've hinted at so much more to this world that could be explored. I love it.

Ok, yeah, I want MORE! :flutterrage: Um, I mean, please. :twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy:

And here was me thinking :twilightoops: was dead.

:pinkiecrazy:

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