What do a griffon, a dragon, a changeling, a minotaur, and a dog have in common? Beyond being thrown out of their hive/mine/cave/clan nothing. Seeing as they are all the opposite of a paragon of their respective races, they decide they should help each other survive.
3159805 Yay
Uhg, the puns! They burn!
3159908 You're welcome
...and then it donned on me that I cannot think of names. Grand. Time to look to D&D books to see if there is a name that fits. Nope can't find any. I have the dog's name though so that is 1/5.
All the puns! I like it!
Huzzah the puns have been doubled
You like like you could do with the help of an Editor :) Need a hoof or three?
3188513 I probably need one.
3188610 Maybe we can make an arrangement? Tell me, do you have facebook? I prefer to use that, you can send documents over it I mean, maybe we could get in contact and work something out. I could boot stamp your story into my author's notes next time I write a chapter or something, maybe get more people to look at it. How does that sound?
3188612 that sounds helpful, except for my lack of Facebook.
3188622 Ok, I think there's a function on the story editor (yknow, where you edit the characters/tags of your story) which allows you to allow others the function of editing your story. Just here to help. (Don't have Twitter/MySpace, have Skype though. As a last resort )
3188647 mmmkay
It's fine :) Just watch out for punctuation, spelling and the context in general. I kind of liked this chapter, but if there is going to be character development, I would suggest making 1000 word chapters
3368247 I've been doing fine until chap three with the thousand
year dragonword chapters.3378720 thank you, and I will attempt to.