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The rarest and mightiest possession of the human spirit can only be discovered by means of story and by no other process of thinking; to know all this and to have it as your own is to have much.

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Applejack wants to go to a party, but Granny smith needs her to walk Apple Bloom home from school. Applejack instead opts to go to the party. Will she be able to live with the consequences?

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you have my attention sire

i think spikes hunting the rapeist , you know dragon pride and all that.

I read this while logged off, and it caught my attention. Very interested in how Spike got a black eye, but I just don't think Spike would do anything to Applebloom.:fluttershysad:

Oh, no. :pinkiegasp: I hope all this comes back and bites AJ and Big Mac in the flank when they find out if Spike did not do anything. I have a feeling and I agree with 3174540 Spike might have tried to stop the rapist, maybe killed him, but got injured in doing so, but didn't want to say anything. Please don't let it be Spike that done it though. I just can't believe he would do such a thing. :fluttercry:

God knows I've made many mistakes. You do have the right mind and heart. We all make mistakes and it is what makes us human. It is who we are and we all live up to the consequences. The mistakes I've made can never be healed. The blood I've spilled can never be cleaned (When I mean blood I mean mine and little brothers). The scars I have will never heal (emotional). You are right, we cannot forget the past but we can embrace the future. It took me such a long time to realize that with the help of a true friend and my girlfriend.

3174540You could be right. Also if these are the mistakes you have made. I give out my dearest apologies. I've lost loves ones but not to rapists. Only to time and accidents. I do understand the sorrow and pain. I understand it too well for my age. 14 is not supposed to be the age when you understand the loss of loved ones. But it happens anyway and god knows. I don't blame him for my sorrow. I blame myself for the things I've done. But like you said in the first chapter. We've all made mistakes.

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Comment posted by Deadman123 deleted Sep 9th, 2013
Comment posted by Deadman123 deleted Sep 9th, 2013

3178511 so thank and rape is hell

NO!:fluttercry: Spike?! How could you?!:pinkiesad2::flutterrage: Now there has to be some kind of explanation. Oh, please let there be some sort of logical explanation for all of this, and not let Spike be a rapist. :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::fluttershysad::applecry: If he did it intentionally, every pony will want his head.:pinkiesad2:

wait wait we still dont know what all happen! spike could have done something else and just be over reacting like push her and got bucked!!! I mean he's a baby dragon but still a baby so killing her really
really now? and he likes rareity not applebloom and one of the only real friends whos not twilights!

Shit. Wow this is intense. I know this is not an entertainment story but I'm really hooked onto it and eager to find out what happens next.

Oh, no. :twilightoops: Now AJ, please don't hurt him like you said. :fluttershysad:

you think he knows appleblooms because didnt he run before he heard applebloom die?

Well, who else has a twisted mind and instantly thought Spike killed Twilight?

3205119 We don't want a repeat of what happened to R.D.

3205422 He might have saw the killer in the act and got black eye as a result.

3210534 I hope that is the case. Because deep down, although he may be a dragon, he could never do that to one of his friends unless he was possessed by either greed or possessed by something else.:twilightoops:

3211516possed by greed? how would that even remotely relate to this?:unsuresweetie:

:pinkiegasp: Donut Joe did this?
:twilightangry2::flutterrage: he is toast.

WHAT?! :pinkiegasp: Donut Joe raped Applebloom! :flutterrage::twilightangry2::rainbowdetermined2: How dare he! :flutterrage: Poor Spike was innocent all along. It seems like to me once they do catch Donut Joe, AJ owes Spike a huge apology.:fluttershysad:

yup donut joe... damn evil tasty donuts!

Its hard to read this story, because one side of me is reminding me that this was based on your story, If this is true im sorry if I brough back bad memories:fluttercry:

i feel her rage so much rage...

This is getting good! :pinkiehappy:

Darn cliffhanger! :flutterrage: First, what was on that picture? And who would do that to AJ and RD? :pinkiegasp:

So I saw that this was in the updated section, and the first thing I thought of was the movie The Prisoners.

3264217 I never thought that but now that you mention it. It does kinda remind me of that movie. Haven't seen it yet but hopefully I'll go see it with either my mother or girlfriend. :twilightsmile:

3264376 I want to see it too.

3264217 that movie was the best! but i hated the ending

It's about to go down.

3264217 I remember that movie.

3267115 Kinda hard to forget a movie that came out last week.

Every one of the fillies were cleared except for Applebloom with a big X on her. :pinkiegasp: Why would Donut Joe only target her though?:rainbowhuh::twilightoops:

Oh, I hope they get that no good, pathetic excuse for a so called stallion.

Well, at least Applejack got a little bit of revenge on Pony Joe, but justice was served with him being caught by the royal guards. :flutterrage:

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