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Rainbow Dash gets Scootaloo to start reading Daring Do books. But as Scootaloo gets addicted to the series, she starts trying to be Daring Do. But what will her "sister" think of it when Scootaloo came home one day with cuts and bruises?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 21 )

3191834 MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Lol.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

3191834 You like the cover art? I MADE IT MYSELF!:pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

Comment posted by FlutterPal deleted Sep 16th, 2013

Omg this story is so awesome

Yes, this will be an interesting read. Certianly a good break from the grimdarkness that I'm writing. Good job! :yay::yay::yay:

My only thing is repeatedly refering to her as "blank flank". Yes she is one, no need to bring it up every few paragraphs. Just call her Scootaloo (Scoots), or even pegasus. Repeatedly calling her blank flank makes me want to ask you if you're Diamond Tiara in disguise.

Decent chapter. I'm going to follow it so I can see what happens next.

3238510 Sorry if that bothered you, and *checks self* OK GOOD! I'm NOT Diamond Tiara!

SHORTLY MADE CHAPTER!

Comment posted by Changeling-Drone deleted Sep 22nd, 2013
Comment posted by Changeling-Drone deleted Sep 22nd, 2013

I love it I wonder why some people didn't like this :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::yay::trollestia::twilightsmile::pinkiesmile:

I love it just LOVE IT. and the OH NO YOU DON'T APPLEBLOOM is so funny :rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

Cute and funny. Your spelling, grammar and such could be cleaned up a bit, but I really like the idea as Scootaloo as a wannabe Daring Do. I'd love to see you expand on it!

Oh no...don't the CMC learn anything (cough cough Applebloom)?! :rainbowlaugh:

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