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Tick. Tock. Tick.

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Join a random pony that has the most oddest experience in it's entire life.

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Spirit 0f Chaos

Spirit 0f Chaos #1 · Sep 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

I had to reread the ending to understand it fully, but once I did, I loved it! Good work!

Vrilix

Vrilix #2 · Oct 23rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

Holy... That is... That's epic!
I mean, at first i thought the baloon could be one of pinkie's balloons, but I didn't see that ending coming.
It was only when the colors of the dragon were described that I realized who it might be.
Whenever i read a fanfic it always leaves me in a state of emotion, that fits the fanfic, but the emotion I'm feeling now is unlike anything I've ever felt before.
YOU, good sir did a great job.
For the love of Celestia, don't stop writing.
If you do, I will hunt you down.

Dezmo

Dezmo #3 · Oct 23rd, 2013 · · ·

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Thanks for your input. I personally love writing stuff that takes a while to notice whats going on. Those moments where hours after you finish reading you suddenly understand types. Don't worry I will still continue to write, although a bit slow, for a while now. Glad you enjoyed this little piece of fiction.

Prince Polaris