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Any chance were getting more?
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I have a few more ideas to write, but did you mean a sequel to this instead?
Not bad. This fandom needs many more straight Gilda clopfics.
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Agreed, agreed, agreed. Agreed a thousand times over.
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Heh, I might just get around to writing a Human X Griffon two shot eventually.
I have to admit that after reading this, the idea is quite...appealing.
That and I suppose I can make up a Griffon member of Royalty...Perhaps the Queen.
Either way, this story was pretty good. Nicely done
3146438 sequel? i dunno....i though maybe a addon...frankly i will take anything you give us for this story :D it was steamy. and awesome. +10% awesomeness
3382087 I think I broke it
You keep switching back and forth between tenses, which makes this story a very distracting and difficult read.
“Hey wingboy!” A loud voice calls out from overhead, nearly lost in the turbulent breeze surrounding him.
As such it should read "A loud voice called out from over head." If you want to keep using that tense, thats fine- but below you start mixing it up.
“It’s Gilda, dweeb.” She shakes her head incredulously, but it evolves to an irrepressible full body shake that she tried to control.
She shakes her head incredulously, but it evolves into an irrepressible full body shake that she tried to control.
I believe "shook" is the tense you wanted, is you want to use the past tense of "Tried" if you want to use it's present tense, you want the word "Tries",