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Diamond Sparkle


I am pleased I joined here and hope to rp on YM with someone.

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Rarity finds that all is not well with the way her son feels about himself, and decides to do what he can to make him feel better and enjoy his life.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

Well, I definitely want to see how this turns out. Best of luck to Blue and yourself.

Why can't I double-like this? It needs more love! :raritywink:

Seriously, though, I actually feel like there should be something between these first two chapters. This is kind of a big jump all at once, to not give anything away.

Definitely need more of this! I was starting to get worried about the content, but after a little bit I really liked the succinct nature of it. It kind of alerts a reader quickly to the difficulties of becoming transgender, but doesn't beat it into the ground like some stories would. It could use a few minor editing bits, but I really can't wait to see what's going to happen.

I'm sorry, but this is bad.

It's just so OOC for MLP.

First chapters good,this story is totally underrated. I like it.

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...wait, Transgender? So this isn't a "Spike and Rarity have a kid" story? :raritycry:

Well then. I guess I'm not in a rush to read it after all. It's still on my "To Read" pile, just, you know, not at the top of it.

I find this story an OK one, but grammar and pacing fucks it up from being what it could be, to be honest. I will keep reading though.:derpytongue2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2:

Dude, slow it down a bit, your pacing is far to forced, not to mention the hasty character establishment. Its a nice story, but your writting style is really irritating. Just slow it down a bit.

i think this story is really awesome. good work looking forward to more cause i feel the same way blue/amber does.

We have periods for a start, a real pain even with modern sanitary towels.

I suppose it's your say, but...

We are physically weaker then stallions…other then the two Princesses that is.

I think AJ and RD could also take most in a hoof-wrestle.

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