Settling In
Settling In
Celestia was confused as to what Spike was inquiring about, she always thought the baby dragon roomed with Twilight during their Canterlot visits." Spike is there something wrong with sharing a room with Twilight?" she gently asked. Her regal voice and radiance calmed most creatures in her presence.
Spike sighed softly and thought of how to explain his issue. "Well not really, just when Pinkie is around... they're kinda... well... loud," he embarrassingly stammered.
Twilight and Celestia blushed and Pinkie fell over in laughter. "This ... whole... time... he's been hearing us...that's so funny," Pinkie muttered during her laughing fit. She managed to compose herself when she noticed nopony else was laughing. "Well I thought it was funny." She huffed and crossed her forelegs.
Twilight fighting through the embarrassment of the moment decided to speak up. "Spike, why didn't you tell me that you were able to hear us?" She gently asked.
"Well.... I um... I didn't know how to bring it up... so I just let it go," Spike hesitantly answered.
Celestia cleared her throat, "It seems that I will have to find suitable lodgings for Spike. Why don't you two get settled in and I shall have a conversation with him."
Twilight was suspicious about Celestia's intent, however; she wasn't going to cause a scene if she didn't have to. "Alright we shall go and get moved in, Spike, see you later." She angrily stated. She walked close to Pinkie, who was growing concerned, and whispered into her ear "I will talk about it in the room, let's just go."
Pinkie knew something was up, she ignored it for the moment and decided to help her marefriend with the luggage. She wasn't sure what to expect from the explanation she would receive but she had made sure to hurry with transferring all the possessions.
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Twilight had finished dragging the luggage with Pinkie's help, to their appointed room for the remainder of their visit. She was already tired so she left her possessions stay unpacked and just dived on the bed wanting to relax. She looked over to her marefriend and waved her over, gesturing her to get on the bed.
Pinkie Pie was worried about Twilight, ever since the mare almost flipped out randomly. "Listen Twilight I don't know what's going on and my Pinkie sense isn't telling me anything... so what's going on babe?" She worriedly asked while getting into a comfortable position snuggled up to her mare.
"Pinkie... last time somepony talked with Celestia alone, after she found out something, it went bad remember? I mean, what if after finding out we had sex... she decides to make you do something even more dangerous? What about Spike... we corrupted Spike... what does he think of us now?" Twilight frantically ranted.
Pinkie Pie gently stroked Twilight's mane calming her slowly. "Twilight you are so silly, Celestia isn't some villainous fiend, and she isn't dead set on ruining our relationship with pointless trials of ancient traditions. Celestia is just being a wise and noble ruler... I think. It doesn't matter anyways, no matter what I have to endure to be with you it's absolutely, positively, without a doubt, worth it!"
Twilight seized Pinkie Pie's lips with her own. The passion, Twilight put into the kiss, came from the unbridled adoration she had for Pinkie Pie during that moment of resolution. Twilight's heart pounded a bit faster during the kiss, her heart rate increased and her body heat followed suit. She was lost in the moment and decided to escalate things lustfully. "Pinkie...Spike might be gone a while, let's use this time to... test the foundation of our bed... for science." She huskily stammered.
Pinkie Pie excitedly giggled, "Oh Twilight you're silly, you don't need to use science as an excuse to get naughty... I love being naughty."
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Celestia had waited until Twilight and Pinkie were out of sight, and earshot, before beginning her conversation with Spike. "I know what we shall speak about may feel strange for you to discuss but I assure you it's important," she carefully explained.
She had to get a good grasp about the relationship and how it even began or progressed as fast. She had been careful to ward off any potential suitor for Twilight and felt that Flash Sentry was perfect for the task of being her protector.
Spike was already uncomfortable having accidentally spilled a secret, he was on the line of betrayal and didn't want to cross it. "Well what is it you wish to discuss, your highness?" Spike politely asked.
Celestia made sure they were not being heard by anypony before she pressed on. "I need to know why Twilight stopped being interested in Flash Sentry and how her interests in Pinkie Pie began," She nonchalantly informed.
Spike wished he had been in a nightmare and not in this tight spot. He was in the position of possibly angering a princess or abusing the trust of a friend. "Well... Flash admitted he wasn't into Twilight at Rainbow Dash's wedding... he said he was a colt-cuddler and was more into Shining Armor... brazenly might I add."
Celestia made a mental note to speak with Flash Sentry about this. "Alright, so when did Twilight and Pinkie begin their romantic journey?" She gently asked.
Spike hoped he would be forgiven for just divulging information regardless of how unguarded it was. "The same day I got punched in the face by Rainbow Dash." He angrily replied.
She didn't know how to respond to that, she had decided to wait in silence until he got the hint that his answer was insufficient.
Spike had forgotten that his 'abuse' wasn't made into a big deal, and only those he told about it knew. "Oh yeah, it was also the same day that Pinkie and Twilight went to Canterlot."
Celestia was startled by such news, "I thought it was their first date not their first day of showing interest." She couldn't believe they had fell for each other so quickly. "Spike... this may be a difficult thing for you to answer but... when was the first time they had intercourse?"
Spike blushed at how awkward the situation just got. "Well... that very same night..." He hesitantly answered.
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Luna was usually a sleepy princess, she had to spend nights awake while her sister slept, and thus she spent the day asleep. Today though something loud was disturbing her sleep, and the sounds the loud thing was making were not appropriate for a castle setting. "Who dares disturb my slumber!" Luna angrily shouted.
She had hoped the noise would stop at the intimidating tone of the royal Canterlot voice. She heard the noise maker continue on almost as if it was challenging her. Luna wasn't going to put up with that nonsense, she decided to investigate the source of the noise and put an end to it.
Luna began stomping her hooves with each step as she made her way to the source of the ruckus. She was confused as she saw a huge cart filled with luggage, and an open door leading to a room where the noise came from. She grew curious as to what kind of animal was capable of making the loud sounds of adulation.
She peeked her head inside and saw Twilight Sparkle being pleasured expertly by Pinkie Pie. She was momentarily stunned and confused about what she was seeing. She couldn't imagine that Twilight, of all ponies, would be this vocal about something so private. She didn't want to become a pervert and continue watching, she was originally there to yell at them anyways.
Before she could turn away, and just let them be, she heard Twilight howl louder than ever before, and shake violently as if possessed by a demon. Luna watched as Twilight rode out her orgasm shakily, and panted heavily post coitus. Luna continued to watched, mesmerized by the display, and saw Pinkie Pie snuggle up with Twilight. It was the last thing she saw before she left.
Luna had never understood romance, and hardly ever felt love. She only knew of one kind of love, and that was for her sister. She knew that no matter what pony she had became attached to it would be pale in comparison to the eternal commitment she had to the sun goddess.
Thinking of her sister had made Luna wish to pay Celestia a visit. She began heading towards the throne room in hopes she was there.
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Celestia was in shock about the sudden influx of disheartening news, "Spike thanks again for sharing the information, I have a special room you may stay and if you need anything just ask the staff at the castle." She gently stated.
"Hey Celestia, Pinkie isn't so bad... even if she may seem kinda odd, she really cares about Twilight," he honestly informed before running off.
Celestia was sure Spike was right, but she needed to still test Pinkie's resolve. She walked back to her throne and sat down in silence. She had a lot to contemplate, and things she needed to investigate as well. She could have sworn Flash Sentry wasn't even at the wedding, it was probably ... before she could finish thinking about possible explanations, she was disturbed by the presence of her younger sister.
"Hello Tia, I was hoping I could catch you here. I wish to speak with you," Luna cheerfully greeted.
"Hello dearest Luna, did something wake you?" She gently asked. She noticed her sister was getting closer than usual and was unsure of her intention.
Luna leaned in and nuzzled Celestia affectionately, wanting to show her sister some love. "Yes something lewd woke me from my slumber." She responded before she was nuzzled back in return.
Celestia wasn't sure why Luna was openly affectionate with her, it was causing her to lose her thoughts. "Lewd... you don't mean Twi-" She was cut off by her sister's giggling and nodding.
"Yes exactly... though I never thought she had the vocals to disturb my sleep... they had the door open as well. I am curious dear sister, we have been family for longer than they have been alive... why is it they can be openly intimate and we can't even spend ten minutes together without you having to run off?" Luna was face to face with Celestia.
Celestia didn't have an honest answer to that question. She didn't know why she was always avoiding her sister at times and didn't realize she had been doing so. "Well if we are being honest here, I have been the princess for so long I sometimes forget I’m just another pony as well. I have been forced to rule Equestria on my own since..." She looked away shamefully.
Luna knew exactly what Celestia was going to say, it was the one thing they tried not talking about. "I get it Tia... I am not the sister you love, I am the monster you keep close by," she uttered sadly.
Celestia pulled her sister into a hug and whispered, "You are not a monster... I am just worried you might become one again... I had to banish you, my only sister, to the moon to protect my subjects... it wasn't fun for me." Tears fell from Celestia's eyes while she whispered, the memories hurting her deeply.
Luna stayed silent while returning the hug. She had nothing to say to Celestia at that moment and she wasn't going to begin this argument now.
Celestia wondered what being a princess was doing to her friendships as of late. Sticking to traditions and forcing her edicts on the others, in order to maintain balance and serenity, for all of Equestria to prosper. It was hard being royalty at times, and her sister was living proof that not all fates are kind.
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The pony who trains potential guards had been informed of the recent development. "You're bucking kidding me, right?" Steel Wall angrily asked the messenger. The tough as nails pegasus, was the one pony who ultimately decided if a stallion was suited for royal duty. If they didn't meet his approval than all the stallion did was waste his time.
The messenger was scared. "No sir, Steel Wall sir," he feebly replied.
Steel Wall was a built and fierce stallion, his efforts had produced the finest guardsmen in all of Canterlot. He was the one who Shining Armor learned his lessons from. "So you're telling me that a mare is going to be a recruit for the royal guards?" He furiously inquired.
The messenger pony now even more intimidated barely squeaked out a "Yes," before he rushed off.
"Of all the lousy and ridiculous nonsense, I have to deal with, this is the level of respect I get!" He loudly shouted. His anger was so potent that no pony dare even approach him. He raged on as he broke things in his office.
It took him about an hour to calm down, and by that time the entire office was trashed. He was still infuriated with being mocked by having some mare think she was even fit enough to be in the royal guards. "She better have fun tonight because tomorrow I am going to make her life a living hell." He dangerously vowed.
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After spending the rest of the day moving stuff in and organizing everything, Twilight and Pinkie Pie took a nice shower together. The water had washed away the troubles of earlier and cleansed them of worries. They washed each other meticulously, not leaving any spot unwashed. They didn't use the opportunity to do anything sexual since they were just enjoying the tender moment.
After the shower they dried each other off, making sure to take longer on certain areas. When they finished they put away the towels and went to bed together. They began positioning themselves into a rather intimate embrace, the position allowed them to gaze into each other's eyes lovingly.
"Pinkie Pie, I can't believe you are doing this much for me, am I really worth it to you?" She nervously asked.
"Twilight you were always worth it, you just never knew." Pinkie honestly replied.
The two lovers became one that night and then drifted off into slumber. The night was theirs and tomorrow they would deal with whatever challenges come their way. They had no worries, no aches, no problems... for that moment they were lost in each other. Their desires gave way to passion, and their love shook the very foundation of Canterlot Castle. That night was theirs, and it ended in bliss.
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3227705 What episode did they get knighted? I remember them being rewarded with a medal but no official title was bestowed upon them. If so why didn't it carry over canon? Why are they still treated like any other pony instead of given the respect they deserve? In canon even after saving the world from Nightmare Moon and Discord the group of ponies don't get an iota of consideration more from anypony. Example: Put your hoof Down( Or whatever that Fluttershy being a bitch episode was called) No pony showed a shred of respect towards Fluttershy besides the mane 6 and it caused her to become a bitch (after the iron will training) and then it still was the same thing. No one respected her until she made them fear her.
That doesn't show continuity.
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Sorry my notifications didn't tell me you posted a reply thingy:
The show sucks at continuity.
Royal Wedding: Twilight has all of her friends, mentor whose known her since she was a wee-little filly, her brother, and her son/assistant that she personally hatched. Turn their back on her. Practically disowning her.
Then at the end of the series. Nothing. It's never brought up, never mentioned, everypony acts as if that whole scene never happened.
The Episode where Nightmare Moon crashes the party:
The CMC are hiding under the same table, are in contact with one another, and are able to see one another. So they have prior contact.
But in the episode where the Cutie Mark Crusaders are formed, they treat as if they've never met before the party.
Cutie Mark Chronicals & Magical Mystery Cure:
CMC shows and builds canon on how the Cutie Marks were gained, and the emotions behind it. On MMC all of that continuity was thrown out the window. The Special Talent / Destiny was ignored for a quick plot device that made no sense.
Changleings eating habits:
The Changelings feed off of emotions (most notibly Love), the Crystal Heart sends love, and happyness throughout Equestria. AKA a Gourmet Buffett. Yet is ignored, no Changeling Swarms over the Crystal Heart, no Changelings show period past the Royal Wedding.
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So Continuity on that show is spotty at best in many areas. Hell ignoring the Knighthood. Ask yourself this.
They've been known to save the world on numerous occassions, many of them in a very public manner (or way that makes it known it was them). Yet none of that is paid any attention or notice. Why would them ascended to minor nobility matter to anypony when saviors of Equestria is repeatedly ignored?
3228414 You also forgot that Spike's obsession with Rarity mysteriously disappears or doesn't have an appearance in season 3... You would think that would have been explained or something?
Also continuity issue number 3
Their cutie marks. Before the cutie mark chronicle episode Applejack declared she got her cutiemark last in class... when you take the events of the cutie mark Chronicles the last one to earn their cutie mark in the group was Rarity because the play took place at night.
The show definitely lacks continuity in some plots or details.
Still their past deeds as I said will be addressed in this story. Because like you I dislike the whole "They saved the world... who cares." Nonsense that the MLP writers seem to continue with.
Oh the changelings the writers biggest fail. They had no final solution to the changeling problem and should have honestly made the spell eradicate them all and not leave that window open.
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Season 3 ... Seriously every show is allowed at least 1 Flop Season and that season was one hell of a doozy. But yeah it'd be nice to see how you handle the whole "Saviors of Equestria" thing. I swear they got knighted in that public corronation / ceremony that had who knows how many hundreds of the Canterlots there. And who knows how many stained glass mirrors chronicling their achievements.
Oh! One error in this chapter.
You didn't close the __________________________________ in Center brackets.
3228443 Fixed... thanks for catching that... I don't know how I missed it DX.
Season 3 had one good thing. Scootalove + SuperDash XD
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Oh! I agree, but it had only two really good episodes. Sleepless in Ponyville, and the Wonderbolt Academy. Possibly Too Many Pinkie Pies.
The Crystal Empire was horribly entered. But I'm not going to rant about how Statues of Unicorns, Armor for their special event was fitted for Pegasi, and the logistics of stealing Horns and Wings from ones oppressed people. Or how saying the Crystal Ponies were all Earth Ponies, when all the Mane 6 / those who stay in the Crystal Empire are turned into Crystal Ponies (and that's only when the Crystal Ponies are drawn as Crystally).
Sorry. I get on ranting tangents on things everynow and then. But anyways I did Like Scootaloo and Dashie. Although they really needed to go into that more. Build up that relationship. Rather than make one episode than forget all about it.
3228478 Yeah also they kept dropping FlutterDash hints all over season 3 but yet no canon :( anyways I won't get into that but I will say this.
The best ending for Scootaloo would be to have Dash and Shy as parents. One is a flying and fast pegasi and the other is a slow and walking kind.
So if Scootaloo can't fly ( as I hear rumors of her meant to be disabled) then boom Shy can help her cope with being on the ground.
If she can fly then boom Dash got it.
Anyways as for this story... when it comes to dealing with the events that lead to the moment (aka the show) I am going to be using key elements and stuff that was mentioned in the show throughout. Also the last thing I want to note about this story is, it won't be an all around comedy as there will be sad moments in the fic but I can't add sad tags to comedy fics (conflicting tags don't work)
If you are a genius like I think you possibly could be... then you know already what the heck is going down after reading chapter 2
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I have a few guesstimates, but I'll wait to read more before I say anything. And I really hope that FF shipping becomes canon. Especially since the Female / Male ratio on the show is 1.86 femals per 1 male. [I did the math].
FlutterDash would be a good family to Scoots.
damn girl close dat door
Oh god steel wall and pinkie's personalities are going to clash so much, I bet it's easy to think of ideas for this xD
3229955 Oh yeah they will clash. Pinkie being super silly and Steel Wall with his ultra tough seriousness... he is going to go crazy.
Especially that scene when they argue about the legitimacy of calling Spike a dragon.
Oh yes! Sequel, I am going to love this!
Unless something horrible happened to the Plot since a Day between Logic and Insanity, of course.
3232466 Huh you know I appreciate feedback but being this upset when I already stated "I am not using an editor for this fic" kind of just makes me feel like you wanted to complain especially about one minor issue while the other huge issue I can understand.
Anyways I can fix the things but be gentle XD
Edit: I fixed two of the issues that I felt needed fixing.
Pinkie saying she will be a more tougher pinkie is how she talks... she isn't known for grammar. If you expect Pinkie to suddenly have a higher IQ or be more refined because she is going to be doing something like becoming a royal guard... I have terrible news for ya XD
chapter one, the chapter where awesome begins
chapter two wherin shit get well and truly ready to get real.
chapter three the one wher....wait..... wheres three. FUCK ITS NOT OUT YET AAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGH!!!!!!!!!!
ahem. uh. yeah sooooo, i uh. like it.
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Most of my issue is that I don't remember any such grammatical issues being present in a Day between Logic and Insanity, so it seems OOC.
And I get that you're not using an editor, which is why I expected you would make sure to edit it yourself...
3236322 I had an editor in the first fic, and they are busy editing other fics or dealing with irl stuff.
I also want to improve myself by editing my own work so I don't need an editor in the future. While having them makes my life easier it also makes me depend on others to get my work out to the public. I rather be able to sufficiently provide quality work in due time then wait on someone's time frame.
3234609 Chapter 3 is done being written but not revised or edited by moi and since my cousin is over this weekend posting updates for chapters is going to be hectic because he needs attention XD
Eh, this is way more porny than I thought it'd be. I think I expected this to be more fun than somber.
Not so much a problem with the story as it is the story turning out to be quite different than the premise that attached me to it.
OMG!! I didn't expect Flash Sentry to be a colt-cuddler! You should do a spin-off series about them!! I would definitely read it.
I'm writing in this chapter because I'm not sure if I'll keep reading this. I just... eh.
There's clop for the sake of clop (meaning, it adds nothing to the story, which is fine if that's just the point), and then there's alluding to clop every five paragraphs. I'm not sure which is worse.
Then there's the whole Spike being a pet thing. I mean, your "world," your story, but this isn't the type of story I expect to see Spike having that tag, and the whole noble/guard thing. Again, it's your show. But it seems completely off (not the only thing, mind you), the pacing is all out of whack (which I suppose is part of the initial drama). And I honestly don't know what else just slipped my mind while writing this, but... eh.