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DerpyRainbow
Well if I told you about myself it'd beat the purpose of my Alias. To clarify, I write in Canadian English.
DerpyRainbow
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Don't wrong man, it was a great story and I loved it! I honestly want more! By the way, when its a male in "heat" it's called Rut. Heat is for females, Rut is for males. And if they were both in heat then surely Braeburn wouldn't have been able to focus on not cumming inside. Unless he has supernatural self-control!
I found this very enjoyable, there's not a lot of female 2nd person out there. It's too bad you found it icky to write in this style, when I'd really love to see more. Either way- sweet stuff!
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Aye, thanks I didn't know that. Heh let's just pretend he had a moment of divine clarity
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I'm glad you liked it, I did have a tough go of writing it. Icky's not the word i'd use but it was definitely not a fun experience. I am very comfortable with third person and sometimes even first person, but not this, it confused me!
Thank you both for the kind words
This was a lot better written than I was kinda expecting, coming in. Nicely done -- once things got going, the descriptions were really well done!
The colored text was weird... I'd avoid doing that, in the future. Also, the tense issues. That said, again, quite good.
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Thank you, perhaps the coloured text is not necessary in this one.... heheh.
I know I severely fucked up the tense in this. I left it for the day after getting half way and then was very confused when I came back to it. Thank you again for kind words!
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Well, anyway. Would it be too much to ask for you to write a side-story of this? Where Braeburn doesn't pull out and then the pregnancy and dealing with it and regretting saying that it wasn't so bad. Etc. I would write it myself, but I'm still working on my writing skills and I don't think I'd be very good at writing clopfics.
I really do have to applaude you for writing a female seond person clop fic (being a girl myself, I kinda wish there were more clop fics out there for the female fans..).
It was pretty good, nice job.
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Perhaps, when time permits!
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Thank you for the kind words! I agree there needs to be more adult content aimed at women, as well as more content from a woman's point-of-view.
Global Orgy.... why can't that happen in real life? it would solve all the worlds "Tensions" between countries. Just one massive world wide screw.
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I don't know if you'd want to see everyone you know having the sexy times.
Ok, now that I'm awake, I'm going to try and formulate words of praise...if my shoty modem doesn't die on me before I post this.
This was really hot and there is not enough female-perspective, pornography on here. The only detractor from this story is the orange/ red text, it's a little distracting. Beyond that, my only complaint is, why'd you stop at the first round? That was hot, I want moar!
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I accept your comment in its entirety and plan to react accordingly, thanks again! 
Thank you for the kind words! I do want to write more female perspective but it is not currently on my priorities
It wasn't terrible, just needs a bit of reviewing, and the sex was great.
I always feel a bit awkward reading mare/female second person stories considering I'm a guy, but whatever, I enjoyed it. Have a like.
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Teehee, your comment is much appreciated!