Vinyl Scratch has just received a new dance machine, and asks Pinkie and Rainbow Dash to be test ponies and try it out. However, Pinkie Pie is the self-proclaimed "Queen of Dance", and she isn't going to go down on the dance floor without a fight...
What about Rainbow Dash? She just wants to leave.
Is that going to happen? Of course not.
Hopefully a three-part fanfic, maybe more. Enjoy either way~
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Okay, this was good, a few errors here and there
, but that's secondary, the story is what I'm after
. This was fun
, fast paced
, and it got right to the point
. I like how Luna and Celestia are playing favorites with the competitors, and your method for incapacitating Rainbow Dash long enough to be moved to the dance floor made me do that girly thumb bite I have a habit of doing when something spicy like that comes up
:, plus it was hilarious as all buck
. This is my favorite type of fanfic right here: just fun, waitin' on your next chapter cowboy
. Here's a mindf**k for you for doing such a great job
I was disappointed when it ended so suddenly - didn't realize it was still a WIP. The princesses being there seemed a little out-of-place at first, but it seems to be working out alright. But what a great, original concept you have here!
This..... Is....... AMAZING!
Aahah, totally shouldn't have used that emoticon.
Ponies...DDR....Celestia and Luna arguing over whos the better dancer......INSTA TRACK!
Oh, snap.
+1? Never thought I'd see the day.
Great chapter!!
Pony Swag... XD Did not see that coming!
Also, I am legitimately scared of Twilight's whole "plot" obsession.
290298
You and me both.
The other version had Twilight and Scootaloo liking plots, so this one's a little bit better.
Me gusta.
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Not gonna lie, I got a little confused when Vinyl rammed her head into the machine and then accused Pinkie and R.D. of breaking it. Did she intentionally break it so that she could get everyone to leave? Or was she just really furious?
On another note, those were some really nice puns XD I don't think I've heard "Maretini" before.
546122
She was getting a massive headache from all the noise, and it only got louder as time went on. She probably meant only to hit it lightly, but the pressure was so much she misjudged th force of the blow.
(Thanks, by the way
!)
(Going into Headconon a bit. Please hold.)
Later at the club:
DJ PON-3 Starts the beat but it shorts out. She then sees Hyp3racktiv playing with no problem.
DJ PON-3 : HHHYYYYYPPPPPPP333333RRRRRRRRRAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKKKTTTTTTTTTIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVV!!!!!!!!
End Flashback
Infinity +1?
THIS. IS. PINKIE PIE!! KICK!
585402
Heh, glad you like it.
hol6shit
Yeah right