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Rumble


No matter your age, everyone has the potential to be a great writer. You aim high and reach higher. We can all be awesome as long as we never give up.

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This story is a sequel to My Mother is a Wonderbolt


Scootaloo has now got everything she ever wanted a family, but now she has to attend school again and Diamond Tiara wants revenge.

As for Spitfire and Rainbow Dash the pair begin to feel more and more attached to one another, as there feelings rise its a battle of will to see who will tell there true feelings first.


Editing: SolidFire & ShadowBlades

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 333 )

Yes!! It's here! I can't wait to give this one a read. I know it's going to be great. Best of luck with writing it! :pinkiehappy:

you now you are awesome blueball right:rainbowkiss:? Thanks for loading it up today :heart:

so just finished the chapter :pinkiehappy: i love you storys this is so awesome:scootangel:

Comment posted by Gargoyle deleted Sep 2nd, 2013

Yes! Its out! I am soooo happy! :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :yay: You just got a like and a fav.
~Solid Sparkle

3145009 thanks, really appreicate it !:scootangel:

3145885 lol, glad you cant wait for the next chapter :scootangel:

3145103 thanks for the complement , i strive in a fast service for my followers :rainbowwild:

3146049 i can see :pinkiehappy: you're the best :scootangel:

3146128 Scootaloo looks so durp in the pic.:derpytongue2:

Already a sequel?!? you work fast!

3146355 I will read the rest of My Mother is a Wonderbolt and rate it thin I will read this one win it is edited.:pinkiehappy:

wow. it's literally called 'the sequel'

cover art by well....me surprisingly

:fluttercry:



ahh, well. i'll make some anyway.

3148995 well i had someone do fanart for a chapter, maybe you could do one for the new chaps :scootangel:

The Cover you made is so awesome:rainbowkiss: (my favorite word btw)
Scootaloo looks so happy :scootangel:

Whoa, you did the cover art... Nice!!!

3149066 My favorite word is serendipitous. I mean seriously its so fun to say

3149165 now that you metion it its really fun to say :pinkiehappy:

This sequel was posted fast... my body wasn't ready :derpyderp1:

i guess the next chapter is on tomorrow right? :pinkiehappy:

3150613 hmm, it depends, i have a whole team going over the story now, however im swamped with higher homework and im not totally sure i'll be able to post for today OR tomorrow :raritycry::twilightoops:

Spitdash! Hell yes! Can't wait to see how this develops.

Good start.
"A job well started is only half done."~Madame Web, Spiderman Shattered Dimensions

3151569 good, glad your liking the story

:yay:a new chapter im so happy i could dance :pinkiehappy::scootangel:

Comment posted by Gargoyle deleted Sep 4th, 2013

3155726cant wait for spity and dashie to come together :scootangel:

this was a great chapter :rainbowwild:

Good story and glad to see it continue with a romance element added in. I can imagine the section where Scootaloo tells someone that her 'mom and sister' are going on a date, or something funny and disturbing along those lines. : )
Shame it isn't teen to add in some other elements, but It's a good story nonetheless. Only thing I am curious about is what is Spitfire doing for money? Is she relying on Dash for that? I know she was a Wonderbolt and sold her home and everything, but you never really explained what she is doing for bits in this or the last story.
I do like the way you have portrayed Spitfire, you've made what she does realistic for her character since she was a workaholic before this. I mean that in the sense of her moving out of Cloudsdale and giving up her career to take care of Scootaloo. Most people would be conflicted due to friends and family, but she doesn't really have any of that holding her back so it made her quick decision to move more understandable. Maybe this comment should have been in the last story but I'm just gonna wrap them all into one post.
Last thing I wish to mention is that the last paragraph of this chapter kinda has the majority of the spelling errors. It's fine but it wouldn't be bad to look through it again and fix them when you can. :pinkiehappy:

3155918 thanks for your feedback I plan on getting to editing the story tomorrow , and yeah i guess I could put a small thing in about money it would probably help explain a few thins to

Rarity turned around and smiled, "Hello darling, is there anything I can help you with?" she asked.

Almost an infamous quote to end a chapter with.
:duck: "Aaaand what exactly do you mean by that, hmm?"
RR: "Nothing really Miss Rarity, it just means that there's more to come and things might get interesting that's all." ^_^
:duck: "Hmm.... If you say so."

Good chapter tho I'm not used to reading romance storys

Dis is gwood! Keep it up! MOAR! :yay: :trollestia: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss:
~Solid Sparkle

3155726 what do you think of my new picture should i use scoot or spity?

3156932 hmmm, i'd go with what ever you thinks best, there both awesome

3156812 i plan on editing today, it will get better :scootangel: hopefully it will be good romance but not to much if you know what i mean :twilightblush:

3156582 haha, great comment :twilightsmile: and yeah your right things are about to get intresting

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