Cadance? Sigh. I should have seen this coming. I shouldn’t have fallen in love with a mare I shouldn’t have. I shouldn’t have become best friends with the mare I loved. And now, I can’t do anything but watch her get whisked away by my other best friend.
Even within your best of friends, there are things that you do not know about. Things that may hold truth as to why Shining Armor can dance even though he knows he can't. Changelings? Perhaps.
The male changeling Vinyl Scratch studies in Canterlot High. Unorthodox may it be to leave the hive, but granted permission from the queen, he studies there and befriends Shining Armor and Cadance.
However close he may be to them, he lives a life of lies. Can s/he withstand the pressure it is to do it? To live a double identity- a pony on the outside, a changeling within? He's Vinyl Scratch- the changeling within.
Rated T for coarse language.
Edit: Added [Romance]
i am so totally gonna read this, man!
I guess it's about time I read something by you eh? You do look at my story so...
3136867 Lols :3 Yay~
Quite an enjoyable read. I was smiling through most of it. The set up was well done, I enjoyed the scenes like the music class and the bathroom scene where you really took the time to develop what was happening, and Vinyl's budding friendship with Shining and Cadance seemed natural. However, I noticed you seem to have a bit of a flow problem when you're writing out the shorter scenes. The one-line paragraphs feel a little stiff and unnatural and the characters are momentarily reduced to hand puppets as they talk back and forth to each other. But glossing over these scenes left something I did enjoy, and this little problem is easy enough to fix in the future.
At least, that's my take on it.
Cheers!
Busted.
Will read this in about 9 hours. Sleep is for the week
Just gotta inhale the last 150k words from another fic and then i'll read this.
Title, pic and description have been rising my expectations.
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3139704 this is the worse fic ever written!
Well, im glad you liked it xD everyone's starting school xD
3136917 thank you :) honestly, I didn't think it would be that good xD
Pillow fight!
3207137 *throws pillow* THE WAR HAS BEGUN!
3207608 *dodges pillows* THAT'S ALL YOU GOT?! *pulls Raripillowcannon* YOU MESSED WITH THE WRONG PONY!
Gah I see my errors, but I'm on the phone and it's hard to fix it D:
Shining! You got some 'splainin' to do!
This story intrigues me...I shall follow.
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we do know that cadence wont know about him being a changeling until after the invasion. It was the first chapter.
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:) dont feel bad. You should feel bad for me. Im waiting for nearly 50 stories to update and over 300 i dont think will ever update again.
also, the time it shows when you replied to me is weird. It says 1d1h. I wrote mine just a few hours ago. XD.
3635495 very. Sure. Now its 1d and 6 min.
3635495 and the second i post something its already a day old.
Nice update! It's been a while for this story. You're acting like me when it comes to posting stories. heh
3635790 heh.. i write on weekend mornings only... that's kinda when i only am free
If it's any consolation, Im actually working on another fic. Once this is done, the other one will be at least 50% done too so it will be uploaded xD
I was absolutely sure, when shining attacked Vinjil, it was a dream sequence. Now it somehow isnt
3678335 Or is the entire thing just a dream sequence? :3
Nahhh... its as real as it gets... im justifying that under "Personal grudges" loool
that, and he's researched about them before... they're like pests :3 I'm pretty sure I'll beat up any bug along the way.
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<---bug
yeah. really nice of you
3680036 ERADICATE.EXE
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But, but
i dont wanna die
3680072 BBBBBBZZZZZZZZZZTTTTTTT
*watches as changeling drops dead onto the floor*
-snickers- ... you ain't dead. Get up fool. That was just some cool magic trick...
... right? o.o
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X.X
Y? Just y.
But still rad.
Oh... don't mind me.
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Wait... so Vinyl is a male...? Also,
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Could have mentioned somewhere that it was anthro.