Looking good, buddy!
I like the interesting use of voice in this story. It was definitely a joy to edit such a strong narrative presence from Eris.
It's for reasons like this that I wish they had a Discord emoticon here...

This was an excellent story, and I hope that incomplete tag was intentional, and not a mistake. One more part would be awesome. Or even an epilogue.
Also, that ending was really just perfect.

I think think deserve another chapter.

Continue please!

It's not often you get a fic with Eris and a Human

So funny and beautiful

Please continue

DAT ENDING IS PERFECT!

This is great! MOAR!

Please more! This is to awesome not to have more!

So that mean that’s a girl?

"So you mean that's a girl?" Sounds better in the given sentence.

hero say I do want I want’ thing.

I do what I want thing?

Ok. Nice one here. I laughed through the whole chapter.
Still some grammatical errors in it, but overall a good way to show Eris personality.
Like and favorite for this one.

Dragon

MOAR

why did she BUTT in so rudely?
He should have really waved her off,and said "piss off,we are trying to fornicate here."

Well by the small amounts of description Eris provides of herself (claw, paw), I'm guessing she looks exactly like in the cover pic. So here's my question: Why isn't there an anthro tag?

Hmm hmm hmm... this is BATTY!

At first, when I saw it in featured I thought, "Mature, sex... just another clopfic...meh." thank Luna I decided to actually read this. This fic has so much more than "just another clopfic"! This is a really nice written story, I enjoyed it to the very end (oh the stars, the ending ) And it would be very bat if you, my dearest author, would finish it after just one chapter. That's just me though.

Overall, I really enjoyed it. Great work!

3247622 Come on, get your echolocation straight. Discord and Eris are not ponies.

MOAR!

3247711 Dude! The Eris on the pic has boobs and hips and an ass... a woman's body in general! That means she's antropomorphic!

Damn this was a good one, i hope that you will continue this.
Because this is gold, go write more stuff with Eris, you can write her pretty well.
Or else.
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No. Not at all. Discord, and Eris are serpentine. They don't have humans like bodies.

Is that a talking horse

well godammit celestia you just become a troll........again

did u base eris off of the greek god of strife??? i was just wondering cuz of the names and personalities

Aulus and I froze as a figure stood amiss the smoke, Sunbutt if I had to guess. And Sunbutt it was as she strode into the room, a concerned look on her face. “Don’t worry Human I’m here to save- what the hay is going on?” She said, looking over at us.

Looking down at me Aulus said something that will make me love him forever, “Is that a talking horse?”

Grinning when I saw the princesses eye twitch.....

Poor Princess Sunny-Butt......

a few words here and there were wrong or missing but I'm complaining, I could still read it

that ending was perfect huh sunbutt

Aulus is a stupid name for the human, and frankly makes me think 'special snowflake' and detracts from the quality of the story.

Other then that one little quibble, its well written though.

Can I add this in the human x pony section in the clopfics group??

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Discord Rule 63'd is known as Eris
Edit: But some people make her a separate entity and put her as Discord's daughter

Meh, this was alright, I guess. I mean, Eris's character was good by your standards. If you ask me, you kinda made her personality like Rainbow Dash's. Egotistical, arrogant, hot-headed, caring when need be, laid back, lazy, and defient.
Also, the name Aulus kept throwing me off, and for the life of me, the words that were either out of place and/or missing, along with several sentence fragments and incomplete sentences are a few important things you may want to discuss with the editors that you said did such a wonderful job with this.
Overall, this was alright to read. A like? Yes. Fave? No.
One more thing, despite how long this was, some character building for both Aulus and Eris could have been done. I felt as if these two weren't as dynamic and in-depth with however they were supposed to turn out. Everything seemed like the summary on the back of a book. Catchy, appealing, and interesting, yet lacked the detail and depth that the actual story provides.

Oh man I love these types of stories make more plz!

3248739

Go ahead

3248739 nah, add it to the HumanxDraconques section.

3248808 thank you for clarfying!

All the mistakes kind of gave me a bit of a headache, but other than that... A very fine job, indeed. You got a couple giggles out of me, which you should feel proud of, as i'm usually a bit difficult to please.
5/5 and favoriting.

I laughed more than I probably should have at the ending.

That ending!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its complete? you mean your not making more

Moar moar moar moar moar!!!

No problem bro , it was a great story overall and I can't wait for the next

Please read previous comment.

I demand another!

MORE * face desk * MORE * face desk * MORE * face desk * Please?

Last bit was hilarious. Lol. I'd love to see more of this.

A little peeved that they didn't go full intercourse, but you know what, this fic satisfied me. You now have a new subscriber. I bow to your incredible writing skills and hope you continue further writing amazingly like this.

I would really like to see what happens next. I mean...kinda...want to know what happens...you know....Eris and....Aulus. Also what happens later with Discord and Eris and so on and so on....>.<

ERIS! ERIS! ERIS! ERIS!

Oh, and Aulus too

all they said was

Looking down at me Aulus said something that will make me love him forever, “Is that a talking horse?”
Grinning when I saw the princesses eye twitch, leaning up and kissing my man on the lips, saying, “Yes, yes it is.”

and i died laughing

the end was pure killer for me

Looking down at me Aulus said something that will make me love him forever, “Is that a talking horse?”
Grinning when I saw the princesses eye twitch, leaning up and kissing my man on the lips, saying, “Yes, yes it is.”

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demon51423 beat me to this quote by 53 sec... great minds think alike, brohoof

Ah, there are far too few Eris fics out there, glad to see another good one added to the count! Would love to see a possible sequel to this, the tings that could (and would) happen!

sir, you deserve so many mustaches i can't even comprehend it. Well done, well done.

Damn it, I thought the human would be Picard! What with Discord basically being Q and all.