• Member Since 25th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 4th, 2013

Warhammer of Fillyhoo


Greetings from Finland to all you bronies out there!

Comments ( 8 )

"I do not own My Little Pony:Friendship Is Magic,nor the characters portrayed therein.This work of fiction was not written for profit.
My Little Pony:Friendship Is Magic and all the characters portrayed therein are the property of Hasbro." - needless. Angry Capitalistic SOPA isnt watching you.
Umm... do you know that you must press "Space" after "." in every sentence? And after "," too.
Overall: nice little slice of life. Grammar, except lack of spaces between sentences, looks fine.

:moustache: Stalin commands to dance!

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"Angry Capitalistic SOPA isnt watching you"
:facehoof:
More like communist plot.
Anyhow, it's a nice little story.
Good day.:moustache:

another 'the elements make the 6 immortal' yes?

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Indeed. I thought it was a nice idea.
...oh god you're implying that the idea is boring I'm so sorry.

305468
Just had to be sure.And also ACTA.
I'm sorry if the lack of spaces detracted from your reading experience.

...Bah!I take commands from no one! I CAN DANCE ON MY OWN!
*does the Safety Dance for 15 hours*

not boring just...

ok yes it is a bit boring.

An interesting story. I liked how you didn't flat out say that Applejack was immortal. Luckily, I haven't read many "The Elements of Harmony are immortal" stories, so I didn't find it boring.

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Thank you.
By the way, what did you think of the allusions to the other characters? Did they work?

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I really loved Fluttershy's sign. I can see her adding a P.S and a P.P.S. to a sign.

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