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Dradavar


What the hell did I expect, I've always been a train wreck - Mandopony

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All ponies do it. At some point in their life they grin. Maybe it's a small mischievous grin, maybe one of pure happiness, maybe it's just a habit, but they all do. My Name is Grinning Sun, and I grin for other reasons.

I grin because I know better.

I grin because I have a plan and the determination to fulfill it.
For my dream to come true.
For her to return.

I grin.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 9 )

It's pretty good, i got a bit confused in the beggining, but it was pretty good, will read future chapters!:pinkiesmile:

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Yeah that was the sense of this :pinkiecrazy:
And thanks for the comment :pinkiehappy:

Very good and can't wait for more!:pinkiehappy:

I'm just noticing that I kinda maneuvered myself into a dead end. :applejackunsure: The next update might take a while, and if I can't come up with something I might have to rewrite the second chapter, but hopefully it will be better than. :pinkiecrazy:

Might I say this is a very nice story you are writing here stranger? Fit as a fiddle! I better be gettin' to readin' this all parnder.

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Why thank you stranger.
I'm giving my best to write this and try everything to make this story as enjoyable as possible. :pinkiehappy:

I changed the description a little bit. :pinkiegasp: To be precise I deleted one sentence from it. :ajbemused: The sentence didn't really fit into the story so.... yeah whatever. :pinkiehappy:

I'm dumb. :facehoof:

I might have to change the description. :facehoof: The last part of it doesn't really fit into the story anymore. :ajbemused:

Whatever. :pinkiecrazy:

Wait a second... He was in a coma this whole time?!?!?!?!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
I don't believe it!:rainbowhuh:
It makes sense...:facehoof:
Umm... I think Twilight's right...:fluttershysad:
I think it provides just the right amount of dramatic flair!:duck:
Ah agree with Rarity on this one.:ajsmug:

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