After witnessing the death of his family after a robbery when he was just a foal, Dark Colt trains for years in the forbidden forest of Ponyville, taking on dangerous creatures by using his own survivor skills that he learned over time, he comes back to Ponyville after his training, to make sure that what happened to him doesn't happen to anyone else
i liked it looking forward to more
I think you should continue!
woot keep it up!!
You should find yourself a proofreader/editor. I've noticed you need to work on capitalization.
Other than that the story itself seems pretty good.