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Have you seen a little girl? She just turned seven last month? Short, black hair?


When walking home one day, Caramel careens right into the mare of his dreams - a beautiful, snowy white pegasus with the voice of an angel. With a little help from Twilight and Rarity, Caramel gets ready for his big date and prays to Celestia that it will go well. But who is the mysterious mare, and why is she so familiar to Twilight?

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With her true identity you were as subtle as a sledgehammer to the face.... *grins* She certainly deserves a good stallion (or mare) in her life, and I'm figuring he need a good mare as well. You did good.

Very heartwarming. I actually Livestreamed it and the story got a good reception. A sequel seems to be in order. :)

I second that, we got to see the second date, and the shotgun speech from the sister

in case you look for cover art, this might fit. only caralestia pic EVER


Haha, I did see that and debated about using it, but I wanted the identity of Caramel's date to be a little bit of a secret x) I know it's pretty obvious, of course, but I hope it;s at least subtle enough to make people go "Hmm...maybe it's actually not her..." :twilightsheepish:

you mean other than on sweet Bloom over there? the second i read sundrops in the title i had guessed it actually:twilightblush:

"a beautiful, snowy white pegasus with the voice of an angel"

shining armor as a tranny with wings

"Orchard Eleven..."

A tongue-in-cheek Ocean's Eleven reference?

Also, great story and obviously...WRITE MOAR!!!

Ok make a sequel or just continue this one? Either way I like a good Ship fic and this one was it.

Don't think that you're so smart with your surprising plot twists and your hard to follow hints at what's to come, for I have figured it all out! Yes, I have found the ultimate plot twist which, while left unmentioned, is implied throughout the entire story. . . Sunny Skies is really Princess Celestia, who is really a Griffin in disguise, who is really just a Changeling payed minimum wage, who is really just an allegory for the state of the global economy! Confess! Confess!

“Oh sweet Celestia! Princess Celestia just kissed you!” I love that quote!

Brought here from Unseen Legacy's favorite page. Going to read this nao.

Aww! So cute!

Make an sequel to this nao!

The one thing that bothers me about this story is that I'd think Twilight would have a little more tact than to barge into the middle of a date like that. Aside from that I really enjoyed this story and would very much like to see a sequel.

So, this was cute. I could tell it was Celestia straight from the pink eyes and was rooting for the ship the entire time (and enjoying each and every reference to Celestia that ensued). However, Twilight really irritated me at the end. I agree with Jack Hamataro Kamiya (mouthful of a name) that I would think Twilight would show a bit more tact than that. (according to fanon, at least. Cannonically, everyone kind of jumps the gun.) That is, unless she had some sort of reason for freaking out about it being Celestia, like, for instance, her having run off and not being seen for a few days. I liked this, and there really aren't that many royalty ship fics that I like.

“ Fine Dining and Breathing .” She answered in a monotone voice. It was obvious that she was deeply engorged in her book. “It’s all so clear… once you empty your mind.” She was almost in a trance.


“Well, me and Dashie are sure to go!” Pinkie exclaimed, jumping up into the air in excitement. “Nopony knows how to party like Pinkie knows how to party!”

Of course Pinkie Pie lol nothing can't Beat you

“Oh… um… n-no… Harry hasn’t been feeling too well lately, and I couldn’t stand the thought of him being alone for so long. In fact, I should probably be getting back now, okaythanksbye !” Fluttershy zoomed off at a speed that made the sonic rainboom feel jealous. The four ponies continued to stare at the spot where she had just been, blinking.

Wow never in my life never seen Fluttershy flies so fast

“Remember when I helped pull you and your friends to the Gala a few years ago, and you said that you would pay me back somehow ‘however I so wished’?” He asked, looking at her. She nodded. “Well, I need you to pay me back now.”

Oh yes the grand Galloping Gala I remember that caramel and lucky was the one who pulled the cart Good Times

“ Fine Dining and Breathing .” She answered in a monotone voice. It was obvious that she was deeply engorged in her book. “It’s all so clear… once you empty your mind.” She was almost in a trance.

Ohh you probably don't want to do that it usually never turn out right I mean look what happened to SpongeBob he forgot his name

“Oh, her name? It’s Sunny Skies! Bye girls!” He turned and ran off even faster. Rarity swooned for a moment before heading inside.

Ohh I think I know who that is but I'll wait on that one although fun fact about that name did you know there was a character named sunny skies from the special short movie My Little Pony rainbow roadtrip and he's the mayor so whoever came up with that name was so way ahead of their time

“I know who you are… Princess.” Twilight suddenly dropped to the ground similar to Rarity, bowing low. Caramel felt more confused than he had ever felt in his life. He stood up and took his place to the left of Sunny Skies.

I freaking knew it oh my gosh lol

“Oh sweet Celestia! Princess Celestia just kissed you! ” Twilight gasped, gaping at Caramel, who stood with a goofy grin on his face.

He is one lucky dude 😊

This was actually a pretty nice story and it's a pretty interesting shipping as well so it looks like caramel been kind of depressed ever since his ex-girlfriend left him but then he meets a mysterious girl and both of them actually kind of like each other even though they only just met but she offered him for the apples he dropped and even walking him towards the house they're about to get to know each other but unfortunately she has to go home but she wanted to see him again which looks like they're going on a date but unfortunately it's been a while he ever been on a date so he asks Rarity for help and it looks like Twilight wants to help out the situation as well which that's pretty cool of them to help out with a little bit of dating advice and even making a suit for him which Rarity did amazingly and they helped him to prepare for his date and with that he was all set to go for the date but then he told the girls that her name is sunny skies which apparently for Twilight she recognize that name but in the restaurant it looks like him and Sunny are having a good time even talking about what they do and apparently she did work at the castle of Canterlot which he was surprised even though she doesn't want to admit it but then Twilight and Rarity showed up and basically Kind of Blow sunny cover which surprisingly she's not sunny skies but it's Princess Celestia in disguise which all the ponies were pretty surprised but despite all that she really did enjoy the date and she really cares about him and he treat her like a normal Pony not just any royalty which that's pretty cool but Princess Luna told her to come back home because the castle or in a panic where she went so she has to go home but not before she gave him a kiss he was surprised to have that and it looks like they're going to see each other more often which he was pretty happy for that I really like the shipping between those two and this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work

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