Twilight and Applejack are engaged. Life seems wonderful... yet Applejack doubts. Twilight seems happy, but she's so busy everywhere but Sweet Apple Acres. Two ponies are stuck in their own worlds, or at least that's how it seems to Applejack. When Twilight is called away from the harvest for an important political summit in Canterlot, Applejack decides in her loneliness that the only way to bridge the gap she fears is forming is to head off into a world of magic and intrigue after her favorite unicorn. She will place herself as a seal on Twilight's heart, come hell or high water.
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Yes, and sadly for Twilight and Applejack, what Twilight has to do takes her away. Alas...
Cyne! Since when do you write TwiJack?
Hm. This looks like it's gonna be a good one.
Heavy and uncertain feel to it all...
~Skeeter The Lurker
3210226 Since now, apparently.
3210227>>3210222 Fixed. Thankya kindly
3210229 Thank you! Hope you like it.
Haven't read much of any TwiJack, but I will say that this sounds quite intriguing. I'm interested to see where this will go.
Write on,
Legion
Slow down man! I can't read all this! It's too much!
Who is the creator of that lovely picture? And this does sound interesting. Think I'm gonna add to read later and wait a little bit for the next chapter before diving in.
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http://shawnyall.deviantart.com/
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Thank you very much.
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http://shawnyall.deviantart.com/art/TwiJack-373991246
Edit: Oops, someone else beat me to it.
Dangit, I keep getting further and further behind my Read Later list. You people need to stop writing awesome things until I have a chance to catch up!
Reading this, one song chorus popped into my head and wouldn't leave. "I'm glad I hitched my apple wagon to your star."
Seems a perfect line for Applejack + Twilight, yet there doesn't appear to be a PMV for it. Maybe it's because the rest of the lyrics are a bit less fitting.
Looking forward to seeing more, Keep it up.
This is promising. I keep and EYE in this one.
I really, really like it. I love it. I think you've done a great job of encapsulating how couples deal (or don't deal) with issues, and the worry that comes from having different goals and interests. It's scary to realize there's a gulf between you and the one you feel closest to, when you can't see an easy solution.
We find ways to put off seeking them, look for ways to continue the status quo while limiting potential damage. Is this the best course? Is it better than calling things to a head?
We don't know, and I love how you're aiming to explore some of these aspects.
I love your characterizations- you expand upon what we see in canon and add layers of depth that can't come through in the show. "Things that mean things" is such a wonderful concept and leaves a sense of mystery for what should properly be a secret part of any relationship...
Oh no, Applejack's a music snob
Is this going to continue?
I almost forgot this story was here until I looked im my currently reading folder...
4244583 I... want it to.
I don't know. I'm very sorry. I wish I could say "Of, definitely" but I'm finishing a novel now for a class and have lots of analysis to do on plays I don't entirely understand...
It's terrible, because I am a firm believer in the contract, the social contract, established between you and I, between writer and reader. But sometimes, I try, and then it doesn't happen and I am sort of stuck in dismay.
But... I'll try. I'll go back to the docs and I'll try.
This is a very realistic take on a Twijack relationship.
And there's a lot of cute moments.
I like it.
Please, please, please, please, pleeeeeease update! Please?
