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Dashie222


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A short story about Flim and Flam's past, such as how they got their cutie marks, and what happened shortly after their defeat in Ponyville. I'm not sure what to lable this since it wasn't really created with a tone in mind. Does that mean I put "Slice of Life"? Oh well. Enjoy!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

"It's a good life we lead brother."
"The best! May it never change"
"And may it never change us!"
-Assassin's Creed II.

I wish there was more conflict on the backstory and much more motivation to "continue trying" in the second. I also wish you described certain things more. I like the brotherly bound between the two though and I will track this. Waiting eagerly for an improved and much more enjoyable fic.

Believe me, it's finally good to see a simple, nice realistic Fanfiction like this after reading one where Tails (Sonic The Hedgehog) has two penises... I didn't intend to search that up.

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