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I’m so tired of being hated. I’m tired of ponies blaming me for something my species did, when I never did anything. I want to be friends with the ponies and I want to be loved in return, but they don’t trust me. They run away screaming bloody murder and don't even give me a chance. All I want is a chance...and I know how I can get a chance, but I will have to change my destiny.
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This took me a month. I hope you enjoy
3121196
I am actually a girl, not a sir, and what?
it was a nice read and didnt saw any errors in grammar so you got my upvote and fav
3121327
thank you my friend
3121248 he/she wants a sequel
3121327 so... if you see any errors you downvote?
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oh...I don't know if I can do a sequel, if other people want a sequel I will do one. I guess a vote then, if you want a sequel for this story thumb up this comment I guess
3121460 I didn't say I wanted a sequel... but that'd be nice
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Haves like and good day.
Meh, I like it, but I think it would have been more interesting if Dark Night was himself instead of a pony. But whatever, it's your story.
3121538
Dark Night is female, and she wanted to be a pony, also, whats wrong with her name?
3121547
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Yeah... Well... cat.
3121552
What is wrong with her name though? Is it because it is close to your name or something?
3121562
No, no, I highlighted the name because it made me think of The Dark Knight A.K.A Batman.
3121571
Oh...sorry. I thought it was a nice name for a changling turned pony
3121576
And it is! I'm just loony. Now here is Pinkie Pie having a staring contest with Pinkie Pie that also kinda looks like a heart breaking:
3121576
She's a dark colored pony, I think it works too.
Interesting little story.
3121596>>3121581
I am happy you enjoyed.
Mother...
of...
God...
Just..stand there because, I'm gonna hug you...
A rather delightful little yarn. The only stumble was here.
Besides the "pucked" (puked?), there's a few words used twice leading to an awkward sentence. Maybe a rewrite such as...
3121451 no, but its nice to see some one shots with good grammar. i keep the downvotes for really bad fics
3122779
I learned people hate bad grammar, so I learned over the course of the year to get better, I think I did that well
3121749
you really like changelings don't you?
3123101 Just a little bit.
Maybe a little bit more.
3121775
thank you for the little edit, I fixed it
3122779 so, you don't Fav even IF its really good?
3123071
well i dont hate bad grammar since i am not perfect writing either so who i am to judge?
3123249
omg, i hope you're trolling right now. For your information i already faved this when the history was just published, and why you even care what i do?
3123600 muhahahaha
3124111>>3123600
Stop whatever it is your talking about He loik\\\ liked the stoty and its fine. I am sorry about spelling by the way, I am at a frieds house wi my siblings as my parents talk to each other about what they want to do. This keyboard is weird
3125706 I know he liked the story, I was just missing with him
3125773
he wasn't happy with it though. so don't mess with him
not bad Pen, this was a good read.
3125965
thank you, it was a secret project I worked on for a month. I like changlings and also no edits
3125780 well someones Jimmy's have been rustled
but alright, I won't mess with him anymore 
3123113
I am happy you liked it enough...but please do not hug me
3128354 arch.413chan.net/Applejack_Gross_Face_Wheat_Worms-(n1318287610651).jpg right.
3129787
I just don't like touching. 
Don't be angry with me
3259048 fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/136/9/8/I__m_Not_Touching_You_by_Diablomako.jpg
I'M NOT TOUCHING YOU!
3259348
...*bite*
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3121749
Can you find me another picture of a changeling like that...only changing into a pony for the sequal?
this was great I really liked it
3642371
thanks, I might make a prequel if I can figure out a good villain that they could face
Damn! I wish in real life you could fix problems like that with a spell =/
Oh. My. God. This was so beautiful and heartwarming! I LOVE IT! Great plot and great story overall. Say, I heard you're making a sequel. What's it called? I can't wait to read it!
This story has officially been deemed an Emerald by the Gem Hunters.
This is a lovely, heartwarming story with a well-done plot. Most fics you see tend to have x becomes a changeling. It's refreshing to see it reversed.
That said, there are a few issues. One is that certain things are a bit inconsistent grammar-wise—an example is the Elements of Harmony, sometimes you have them capitalised, and sometimes you don't.
The pacing was off just by a little bit, especially near the beginning. And at the very end, the transition from first to third-person is very awkward, and could use a page break.
But overall, it was a good story, and I look forward to reading/grading the sequel
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The page break would have only been for like two sentences, so I didn't think it would be nesasary and that the transition would make it better without a break.
3921173 It still needs a smoother transition of some sort. I've had page breaks for two or three line segments before. A lot of stories do this, especially when ending them off.
3259048
It was alright.
/10
Meh.
Forgot what this story was about, but I'm still awaiting that sequel.
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ok, here's one more un and up.
since you maked it complete, will there be a sequel?