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Brian Jacko


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Princess Celestia and Princess Luna have been experimenting with top secret sports that they have been working on in hopes to bring new excitement and entertainment into this years upcoming Equestrian games. They need help in finding ponies to promote and play this new sport so that they can showcase it to the officials at the Equestrian games.

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Well, this story certainly seems interesting. I'll be looking forward to giving it a read.

3142528 Awesome! Glad to hear it! It should be a "smashing" good time! :pinkiehappy:

Applejack rolled her eyes and said, "I bet the only reason why Rainbow Dash wants Soarin' on her team so badly is so that she can bash his shuttle..." Before Applejack could finish her sentence, Rarity had stuffed a shuttle into Applejack's mouth.

AJ, you are one badass pony. :rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

3146113 A.J. had to eat her own words soon after though since she wanted to do a little shuttle bashing with a certain stallion afterwards.... :applejackconfused: :raritywink:

The most hilarious part is when Pinkie Pie said " Now we have a place to bash shuttlecocks and balls! " I started cracking up. Good story btw! Nice job on the comedy button also, you probably had the best comedy story ever! I will probably re-read this everyday for a few laughs! Also I just love the ending.

3148150 Thanks so much! Pinkie Pie can sure be a few apples short of a bushel sometimes! :pinkiehappy:

Oh god, the groanworthiness of this title is intense.

I'll have to read this...

So many fics on my read later list @_@ I'll get to it eventually...

3153523 Glad to hear it! Hope you may enjoy it! :pinkiehappy:

Aw Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell NO!!! :applejackconfused:

Now Ah know ya'll didn't just ship mah sweet Applejack with sum unknown, un-canon, pansy-wansy Pegasus from the Wonderdolts! And what was goin' through ya mind makin' a good wholesome country lass like that shake her flank like some nasty dancer in one of em' stripclubs on Clop Avenue? Dat ain't da Applejack Ah know! :flutterrage:

She's mine ya hear? MIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE!!! :heart: :pinkiecrazy:

Seriously though, I won't pretend to understand all those sports terminology despite being from a country that loves badminton. Not really big on sports meself... heheh... I guess this is another one of your sillier fics judging from the content and the ending... poor Applebloom... :(

I do however, fancy the idea of multicolored shuttles and Ping-Pong balls, I can imagine them being gloriously animated! Someone on youtube do it now!

Alright, I remember you said something about this fic having a more gruesome ending originally, I want to see that version! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz??? :raritystarry:

3213462 Un-canon? He is canon! Look him up. He's an official Wonderbolt. I didn't make that name up and he appears in the show several times. The only official Wonderbolt who hasn't made an actual appearance in the show as of now is Rapidfire, but he is mentioned by Fancy Pants in the episode Sweet and Elite. Maybe in future seasons Rapidfire will appear. It's not really a big deal though. I just want to see Soarin' in the show again, really. It was disappointing enough that he wasn't in the Wonderbolts Academy episode in season three. :rainbowkiss:

I'll admit it. I really had Applejack pull out all the stops when it came that shipping bit. It was partly for humor, and partly because she felt like she had to work extra hard to get him interested in her because of the hostility she gave him before. It was really silly, I know, but it was really fun to see her behave that way. Right, Applejack? :applejackunsure:

I wish you didn't bring up the part I cut out in the story here. I cut it for a good reason. :facehoof: It's ok though. I'll send it to you in a private message on Facebook. Thanks for reading. :pinkiehappy:

3213527
Oh I know of that Wonderbolt member, just kept mistaking him between Fire Streak and Lightning Streak. :twilightsheepish:

The point was, AH WILL DEFEND MAH APPLEJACK TO MAH DYING BREATH!!!

(Applejack: ...ya'll need ta get out more... :ajbemused:)

Ahem... well, now after reading the original ending, I'm glad this one happened instead! At least it wasn't Sweet Apple Massacre! I still haven't got the guts to read that fic yet, and judging by what I've heard, I'm not sure if I ever will... 0_o but who knows? curiosity right...? :pinkiehappy:

3215960 I haven't read any mature fics aside from my own that I write. However, I have been tempted to read Cupcakes and the Rainbow Factory story, but I have been putting it off and I don't know if I will ever read them in the future. I saw the Cupcakes video on YouTube a few times and that was kind of enough for me. Right now, I'm too focused on writing anyway.

"Did you remember to add my favorite rubber ducky, Xuxa?" Celestia asked.
"He's floating in the warm water and awaits for you squeeze him, and make him squee, my Princess," the guard said.
"Excellent," Celestia said.

Oh no...

PRINCESS CELESTIA IS TORTURING RUBBER DUCKYS!

GET THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY!

That is one of the funniest stories you've ever made! :rainbowlaugh:
Need I say that you really got Dashie and Soarin' together very well? :yay:
There are a couple of words that need to be fused, like "Spitfire," "eyelid," "halfway," etc. Plus, there need to be dashes between certain words, such as "rubber-like." A couple of quotation marks are either missing or added in by accident.

3290856 Oh, I'm glad that you really liked this one. :twilightsmile:

I'm so busy with my newest (SiC) story that I'm working on right now. It should be out within a few days from now. I'll try to remember to go back and find those little errors. Thanks for pointing them out. My editor really needs to catch up with my stories. He has like twenty more stories of mine to read or so, but I keep making so many and he has been very busy with school.

I'm already well over 40,000 words into this new story and I just want it to be done because I have been working furiously on it and it's getting tiring. Prepare for more Soarin' and Dash! This will be by far my longest fic to date. Lots of comedy in this upcoming one too. :pinkiehappy:

I'm guessing that this new story will end up being another mature rated fic though. I'll have to see what the admins think. Certain flashbacks happen from a previous (SiC) story. :raritydespair:

3295985
Sounds good!
Well, my best guess is that he was the Wonderbolt with the white mane who appeared in "Sonic Rainboom" with Spitfire and Soarin'. He was in "Sweet and Elite," too, if I recall. That's why the collar on the puppy in My Little Puggy was white.

You know, when I saw Celestia reprimand Dashie for laughing at Fluttershy, it kinda reminded me of this:

Uh oh. Mom heard that. :raritywink:

Celestia: Rainbow Dash, if you don't apologize to your little sister right now, I'll have you banished to the Everfree Forest for a month!
Dashie: Okay, okay, okay! Geez, you sound like my mother.

3369888 That was terribly adorable. :pinkiehappy:

By the way, that new (SiC) fic I have been working on is finally up. It's called, "They Will Know By Our Love."

3373773 Glad you see the similarities.
I noticed. Reading it now.

Alright, so I'm going to be a little critical here.
First, there were lots of grammatical mistakes throughout the story. Minor ones, but they add up. Have you considered getting a proofreader? I'd be glad to help. :twilightsmile:
Second, while I enjoy playing Badminton, I find spectating boring, and I'm sorry to say that carried over into my reading. I'm sure it's just me, but I found it hard to keep going sometimes. However, I continued anyway, out of respect for the author.
I must say though, I was not expecting that final chapter, especially from you. I guess I don't know you all that well, huh? :moustache:

3437703 I do have a proofreader, but he's in school and has a lot of catching up to do. I'm sure that he'll get around to helping me edit again soon. :twilightsmile:

I'm sorry you didn't find it that great. I don't know how many different ways I can describe or write about a shuttle being volleyed. I did the best that I could without repeating myself. I didn't know that you played badminton! I used to play myself a long time ago. It's not very popular here in the U.S. and there isn't a place to play near where I live anymore. I also used to play Table Tennis so much as well.

I do thank you for taking time to read this even if it wasn't your cup of tea. Really, I do write some things that are quite out of the norm sometimes. I like to keep my readers surprised.

Also, your current profile picture of the Unreal Tournament "U" logo.....I can only hope that you'll take the time to read this....This is currently my most favorite story I have written.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112994/an-unreal-day

3440253 Thanks, added to Read Later. The avatar is from a comic I originally planned on doing, Unreal Circumstances... Which, if you look it up, never really happened. I'm saving the characters and world for later though. And before you ask, no, it has nothing to do with Unreal Tournament (though that IS a fun game series). :twilightsheepish:

3440967 That's awesome. I would have never guessed that. I'm glad that you do like the game series though. It's one of my personal favorites :twilightsmile:

I just heard the sound of the wedding bells.

Bevor Rainbow Dash ihren Satz beenden konnte, holte Pinkie Pie ein Mega-Telefon heraus und schrie so laut sie konnte hinein. "Hey Soarin'! Rainbow Dash ist in dich verknallt und sie möchte, dass du ihr gemischter Doppelpartner und ihr besonderes Pony bist."

Our typical Pinkie Pie😌😂

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