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A female blue pegasus and a male red Earth pony. What could happen? Exactly what nature intended! The two ponies get mad at each other in town and wake up in the other's body the next day! How the heck did that happen?

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How does this story have more favorites than likes? Since when is that possible? Or did I count the number of 'someone favorited your story' messages wrong? :derpytongue2:

The ending... Brain hurts. So hard to tell who was who

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Just you wait, your mind will get screwed over much more..... :pinkiecrazy:

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Where is that fail? I honestly can't find it. :twilightoops:

3119676 The description. It's "earth pony".

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OH, well now I feel like an idiot lol....
I was looking in chapter 5 because that's where it said you commented....
I don't feel different though, guess I'm always an idiot :derpyderp2:

what da hell did I just read?:ajsleepy::ajbemused::derpytongue2::flutterrage::fluttershbad::twilightoops::rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::moustache::facehoof::facehoof:

I realize the story was probably pushing the border between Teen and Teen Sex with the references the next and not so final chapter will likely make, so I made it Teen Sex, just to be safe, no pun intended

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A story, duh :twilightsmile:

:twilightsmile: You did a very nice job.

My only issue is the short chapters : /

I find it hard to get into a story when there is not enough words to flesh out a plot and display actions emotions and other things in at least 1 chapter

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Thank you.

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Thanks for telling me what I did wrong, I will keep this in mind for future stories/chapters

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......too...much...Rarity......

Working on the sequel now, hang in there for some kick butt and possible murder.

oooooooooooooooo Which element did he get?
:rainbowhuh::raritywink:

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Rainbow Dash's elemnet, ekement, leement, elemetn, (why can't I type today?) element of Loyalty. Which other ones COULD he get? He was spending almost all day every day with Rainbow Dash after all....

Who would even try to rape anypony mid-day? Rainbow don't take that kind of abuse! :rainbowlaugh:

Well... there is a turn of events for you. Eeyup :eeyup:

Hmmm. How in Equestria do you make Rainbow feel dumb? :facehoof:

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I don't always read fanfics, but when I do I prefer the kind where a stallion and mare get their bodies switched. (That might have been a bit long) :moustache:

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You sir, have just read brilliance. :pinkiehappy:

Pretty great story, can't wait for the sequel.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

After reading the first chapter I am curious as to how you drew the conclusion Rainbow Dash was Rich. I realize your universe isn't the cannon one, but I'd still like to know how your version of Big Mac drew that conclusion. I'm curious because it's usually the farmers who are struggling millionaires (or better) and poor people who join the military to escape poverty.

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