Spike had given up on dragons, considering them all to be delinquants after he met with some of them during the great dragon migration.
But one night after getting into an argument with his friend Twilight, he began to have strange dreams where a strange being would talk to him claiming to be a dragon spirit of a long lost race of dragons with beyond extraordinary power and that Spike himself may be one.
Now Spike is in danger from the very Ponies he called his friends and may even re-awaken a war without end, the eternity war is threatening to return and Spike is the only dragon with the power to stop it.
Chapters (4)
Interesting. The set up has a lot of potential.
3114448 I know right.
The description has numerous errors, so I dunno if I'm even gonna try this. +Read Later list.
Ug so many errors
3115143 yeh i know i dont realy have any one to help me edit just yet, i was gona ask my mate when i get to school today.
If you need a editor come to me
Yay, another useless generalization on dragons based on a bunch of teenagers being teenagers (assholes) and a hostile encounter where Spike did invade his home (at least that's what the description implies).
3116602Who are you calling an asshole?
3114448>>3114755 agreed dragon brothers
It's great. I've been scouring new stories to see if I can get a first look at the next big thing and this is the closest I've gotten so far.
3117363 Thanks i'll try my best to write a good story.
(But dont expect too much this is my first fic 
)
3116602 So what exactly is wrong with it, i'd like to know so i can rectify it.
3117257 Likewise my scaled brother.
3117729 Maybe he shouldn't give up on them per se. Maybe he could just say now is not the time to try and be a dragon.
It's not your fault (I blame the show fir portraying them that way). It's just a huge pet peeve of mine. Needless to say this seems interesting so far
This sounds freaking awesome!
3118426 so i should have him interact with the original dragons from the show and try to develope them a bit diferently than they are portreyed in the show?
(excuse bad gramer/ spelling i suck at english)
3118828 Yes. But not initially. Either eay this seems like it'll be a good fic
3120007 hey just wondeering if i could get you to read through the next chapter befor i post it because im not sure if its a good way too start it and i wanted a second opinion.
3121080 Sure why not? I'm not really an editor but I'm down with helping out.
3121805 sweet thanks
so i just send the chapter to you as a mesage right? 
3122496 Yep. I have classes today so I won't be able to reply for a couple of hours
Spike needs to give a certain someone a bitch slap.
3144464 A massive flaming back to the sun.
3144797 Yeah, and ten bucks says he is going to grow wings at the very least.
3144822 That would be awesome.
I ment to say earlier a flaming back hand to the sun.
3144875 I guess as much.
3145328
3144464>>3144797 I say that is not enough break her legs with a bat
3145664 I can think of 3 whole seasons
of reasons.
3145664 A FLAMING BAT!
3145755 now that is worthy of a dragon
3145726 don't forget the movie
3145805 Can't forget that.
I got my eye on you Hasbro.
I hope Spike tells her off.
I believe that since Alicorns and Spike's race have a long dispute between them, Twilight's alicornhood is making her aggressive towards him.
Ok
3187097 I was wondering whether or not that the case as well. Either way though he should get his wings, learn how to do magic, and get the heck out of there.
3187241 yeh I'm not really sure about how this chapter turned out either.
I'll give this a tentative follow. It feels... just a little awkward for some reason.
Spike get the to carving and get to ass wopking on that bitch
3187958 explain so i may fix
3188085 I don't know. Maybe it's just how Spike rolls over and takes it from Twighling, or maybe it's just from Twilight acting like this. It just seems awkward to me.
moar
3187300 hey, thus story is good, and will continue to be good cuz I see potential
I hope it will at least.....
I hate you Twilight.
At this rate she is going to disown Spike.
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Twilight deserves to have her head cut off and shoved up
's womb.
3244191 very descriptive
Screw you Twilight! I hope you burn in Dragonfire!
In other news... This is a great story. Please continue.
3244191 I prefer riping her hreat out through her eye socket then shoving it up her ass
You know this remides me of a scetch on derpy burro Spike had his bloody wings unleashed and Twi was debateing wther to clean give him first aid or to the hospital