Majora messes up a teleportation spell and is sent to Equestria. Since the laws of physics in that universe are different, she turned into a filly!
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Emma Entei
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You need to start a new line for each character's dialogue, and I highly suggest double spacing after each paragraph so it doesn't look compressed. I won't leave a like or dislike, because I can see potential in this. I'll let someone more experienced critique the other parts.
I'll fav it so I can see it's progression not a bad idea though,it would be nice to see that you use all of majoras mask powers, I also recommend having her see the princesses after she using her power, on diamond tiara turn her into a baby only ideas food for thought.
Keep up the good work
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LOL Thanks and... YOU READ MAH MIND!
Good storytelling! Don't see too many mistakes besides the ones already commented on. I want to read more, I think. Like!
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THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU! 
YAY MY FIRST LIKE
Wow, I could already tell this story would get good .o.
Since you know... I can't even write a mere 1,000 words
Great so far! Better than mine at the least
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Thanks :3
And what i did was combine two chapters at about 500 words
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Again, like I said (or what I'm going to say now):
YOU ARE SIMPLY AMAZING TO EVEN WRITE A MILSTONE OF WORDS.
<claps hooves> Proudness comes over me
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Is it weird that when i am complimented i get a headache that feels good? Am i a changeling or something?
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Pffft.... HAHAHAHAHA No. LOL
I think it's a sign that getting compliments would make your head affected, in sort of good way
sorta like Majora's reaction.
Lols yeah XD
Chapter feels rushed blah blah blah.
"Isn't" should be "aren't" if you're not sure about a conjunction, use the full version instead.
Technicolor.
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Thanks for the advice :3
Wow this is different
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Specially in fanfics 
Yeah, but usually different is a good thing
Space things out better but I also think that majora would be a bit more unstable. Remember it's, what, second form?
shrines.rpgclassics.com/n64/zeldamm/images/majorasincarnation.jpg
Yeah. That one.
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I'm not very good writing unstable, but she (Well for this fic its she) is going to have an outburst at school when she meets Diamond Tiara 
Lets just say its all being held in.
Yeah,
Just so you all know imma get an editor to help with this story
YAY FOR EDITORS!
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practice helps great of you want to write more than 1000 words. I had that problem when I first started to write and know I can write more than 3000 words
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WAH? 3000? THAT'S OVER 9000!!!!!!!
No, not really, I was never good at numbers anyways
Any-hoof, I guess practice does make perfect!
how long until she causes the apocalypse
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Oh i'd say... five to four weeks?
When is the next chapter going to be released? This fic is getting good, I don't want it to die.
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I'm glad you like it 
Sometime soon, i am already workin on it
3135491 I think that this story will get GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!
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I'll try not to dissapoint 
yay
Gotta love Majora.
I'm sorry for not posting the next chapter, my friend keeps dragging me outside and forcing me to run around with her.
IT IS THE WORST. THING. EVER. Ok enough being Rarity, i've managed to go half way through the chapter 
I'll post it as soon as i can!
Edit: Turns out my friend deleted my chapter
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th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/141/c/0/heavy_is_not_amused__by_oudieth-d50jt0r.png HEAVY IS NOT AMUSED!!!
Update this soon or the moon will fall on your town.