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Dream Bolt


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Rarity is certain that this trip to the mall will go well. Rainbow Dash is a street-wise, socially aware pony, and has been to malls before. Nothing could go wrong, right? It's not as if Rainbow Dash intentionally causes trouble....

Read the prequels! That is, um... if that's okay with you.
At the Mall
At the Mall Again

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Lol!:rainbowlaugh: This had made me laugh until me stomach hurts too much that I had told myself to stop, but my emotions had betrayed me.:ajsleepy: Fantastic work!:heart::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::yay:

Now we need to see Rarity bring Twilight along. Let's see if Princess Luna is right about her. :rainbowlaugh:

How the hell did that firefighter think that rainbows MANE was on fire!? It's a friggin rainbow! :facehoof:

So the only sequel possibilty I see are with the CMC. Since Fluttershy is too self-consious. And I just can't see Twilight in making any trouble.

3102773. You'd think that, but you'd also be surprised at how stupid mall staff can be.... :pinkiecrazy:

Anyway, another funny story. And why did Luna suspect Twilight? :twilightblush:

3104664 About the firefighters... yeah. They were having WAY too much fun hosing everything. If it was red, yellow, or orange, it was a target.

As for why Luna suspected Twilight, I personally think that Twilight's mistakes have resulted in enough chaos to make even Discord proud. (Lesson Zero, anypony?) I get the impression that Luna hears about what Twilight learned about friendship from Celestia, but all Luna is thinking is, "How doth these ponies get into so much trouble every week?"

Comment posted by Dream Bolt deleted Aug 25th, 2013

3103129 I do plan on the CMC showing up, but Fluttershy and Twilight won't be excluded. Imagine a pantophobic Pegasus in such a mall. And as for Twilight, her paranoia could easily get the best of her. Not to mention, I have Spike planned to come along as well in the Twilight episode.

C: oh rarity.... u still pain me

3105239 Still don't see anyway how it could work. But you must have some ideas.

You know if you have Fluttershy going to a Canterlot mall you HAVE to include Discord there too. After all they are friends. And who wouldn't want to spend the day with your friend at the mall?

3105239 Fluttershy + arcade sounds like it has potential. :raritywink:

I really enjoyed this little trilogy and I sincerely hope you do another story.
Any story with Rarity in it is fine by me and I loved your characterisation of Rainbow, Pinkie and Applejack.
It's too easy to write a story where they all just bicker all day so I enjoyed the fact that your story was more concerned with their friendship and the two of them striving to get on rather than just childishly picking at each other. I also like the fact that your story focuses on the positives of the friends being different, and always end it on a heart-warming moment rather than a hastily-placed make-up after pages and pages of venomous arguing.
So cheers for these mate, I loved them and I hope you revisit this lovely idea :twilightsmile:

And another one involving a mall.

I am SO very loving these.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Lmao I love Rainbow Dash :rainbowlaugh:

Another epic story. Old Neighvy, great pun!. I love that competition at the end. Rainbow shoving a burger into her mouth 🤣.

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