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ThePhantomAssassin


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Hope there's more of this in the future

3095929 It'll stay completed. Chances are when Aura and I role play again, if it's any good I'll convert it over to a story format and gran you another chapter. Since this is solid clop there will be no cliff hangers and can just stay completed.

3097001 Oh see,still good story :D

3097540 Well thank you, I'll be sure to let Winter know someone likes our stuff.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. One little comment: there are a few spots where you referred to the male in the story in both the third and second person in the same paragraph, going from his to your. If there was one thing that sorta jerked me outta the story, that would be it. Everything else was gold!

5635379 glad you liked it! When I get off work, I'll see what I can't do to fix that.

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