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Dawn Flower


Have you ever heard about the theory about how subatomic particles can pop into existence at random? Well, replace subatomic particles with updates and you have my writing style in a nutshell.

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The Equestrian Wasteland is a huge place, filled with all sorts of interesting ponies; each with their own unique and interesting stories. This is the story of a mare who is simply trying to survive day-to-day, without any big adventures happening. However, it seems like fate has other plans.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 8 )

Is this story meant to be a one shot or is that completed an error?

Volunteering for the Pit is one way to make your day go from bad to worse no?:raritywink:

3150728 I originally meant for this to be a one-shot but now I've decided to expand it.

She'll get killed by Littlepip like the others in Red Eye's army if she stays with them

Oh, promissing shit! :pinkiehappy:

Well at least he lived and I wonder what he's gonna do now that Red Eye has died, good chapter again :yay:

I love the little in-game accuracies that are presented in this. Like backing out of a terminal so that you don't get locked out. This was a pretty emotion-invoking chapter, where there's a build up of a friendship developing (my prediction), and the hatred towards the Enclave. Only thing I thought was wrong with it were the little grammatical errors that there are. Doesn't entirely matter, though. Amazing chapter either way

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