Pets have a pretty easy life right? No responsibilities, no taxes, they get to freeload their way through life and they still get all the love and affection they could ever want. Sounds like a pretty sweet deal, almost like it would be worth putting up with someone who controls when you eat and when you can go outside for every waking moment of your life. Well one human is going to find out if living in the lap of luxury is really worth being lorded over. Despite the fear and hate that is thrown his way, the real danger is just waiting to strike....
All Locations are from the map of 'Where the World Ends.' [old link doesn't work anymore so you'l have to google it.]
This map is not mine and I really hope the original creator doesn't mind me using it! (please don't hurt me....)
i'll fave this for now
....uh, thanks! didn't think i would get any activity on this for a couple of weeks!
Interesting premise and a good start. I will enjoy seeing this play out.
3135856 just got really excited after reading that comment! I'll try not to disappoint you
This looks pretty interesting...Although, I think I've seen another version of this concept around here at least once? Anyone correct me if I'm wrong?
3154071 that would be kind of interesting, hope mine isn't an accidental clone! just out of curiosity how would I find a story like that? I kinda want to read it just cause I like the concept and would love to see another view on it!
moar sir please
looks promising
This reminds me of Planet of the Apes.
I've had an idea in my head like this in my head for a while now...I guess you beat me to it! Fair play
Oh and when I was reading the first bit when our human was in his world I couldn't get a song out of my head. It's about a guy's last day of life being the best he ever lived.
It's called:
The Day I Died by Just Jack
Fits the first bit perfectly cos it isn't really sad or anything, it's actually quite upbeat!
3176387 just listened to it....that was awesome!!
3156027 thanks! it's a favorite movie of mine and was sort of the inspiration for this fic
I'm so excited to see people actually interested in a story i'm writing!
This is the motivation I've been looking for. I'm working on the second part as we speak, and I hope to have it up in a few weeks......though that may be longer depending on my mood and if I get hit with more writer's block.
Why'd he never try to speak?
3272841 He does but because of his stunted tongue it just sounds like garble and grunts, I did explain that!
3294411 You did? Does he try writing? Will he ever talk? Does he kill Shining Armor? Will there be human magic?(maybe telepathy)
3297358 you'll find out as more of it is published, so please be patient like everyone else
3297415 I don't like being patient things always happens so slowly...and in the right order.
3297489 sorry....Discord refused to help write my story so it will be typed in an orderly fashion
3297539 Grrr. DISCORD!!
This story reminds me very much of Your Human and You, except the main character seems like less of a shit head.
3341593 Haha! truth is I'm kind of posting chapters as I type them, I might take a long break from posting to flesh out and write 4 or 5 more parts and post them every couple of weeks.
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OK?
This chapter, I like it. Still want another one.
The long wait for new chapters is driving me crazy!!
3649181 sorry just started part two cuz my pc is dead, typing it on the site right now via my Wii U. I'm a bit of a perfection freak when typing my story so it may be a while before part 2 is complete to my satisfaction
You are missing a be
4329392 thank you for that! it's all fixed and good to go.....again lol
Dangit!I wanna read more!!
It lives!
just like Red Beards car.
Yay! Update! Really enjoyed reading this! It's a very interesting concept
4331221 aw why ignore it?
just want some reasons from people to try and improve my writing skills
4332704 Ah, well is gonna be a dick in my story so I can see why you won't read it.....oh well thank you for at least checking it out
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I'm with Moon on this one. It's not even the being a dick so much as the being randomly and stupidly hostile towards the human OC in front of his aunts so the princesses can chew him out thing. Happen so often it just gets real tired, you know?
4335387 oh I have plans for Blueblood.....that's all I can say without spoiling anything for the readers......
Please continue this story, I'm really enjoying it a lot
kibble doesn't actually taste anything like meat. it's creepy...
4708412 LOL! But how do you know? The reason I described it like that was inspired from the Equestria Girls movie when spike gets that dog treat from Fluttershy and absolutely loves it. So I thought the same idea could be applied to this situation.
I really love this story
. I can't wait to see what happens next so please update 
4732219 hey Fathead, I really like your story, and can't wait to see what happens next, but every time when I check to see if it's been updated, it hasn't. So when you update, will you message me to let me know? Thanks. Also, I wanna take the time to thank you for the time and effort on your part to write this story. I really like it so far, you're doing a great job on it. So just let me know when the next chapter is up. Also I have a story this sixteen year old human, who was born in equestria, but in equestria, humans are exotic animals, like in this one sort of. So, he tries to avoid ponies, and live a life of freedom. It's called born in equestria. Feel free to check it out, and let me know what you think. It only has the prologue and chapter one though
4778386 I usually drop a blog entry but i will let you know when im done with the third chapter im now working on.
4792668 cool thanks
cliche
You see that tittle
Burn it kill it with fire
Bad puns are bad and you should feel bad
Why do I always fall in love with stories of the nature
But still I like how this is going so far
I can't wait to see when there going to find out he's sentient
I read it out of curiosity but as always happens with these kind of stories I can't see why the human doesn't try to show his sapience to the ponies. What's the point? So far he just behaved like a bad trained chimp...
I'll track this from afar but I can tell that if it follows this trend I'll be out of the ride. It's not your story per se, it's just that previous readings of stories with this premise left me with a bad aftertaste seeing that the human doens't try to show he's a intelliugent being from the start for no good reason, and it's getting pretty tiring.
Nevertheless keep up the good work, this is just my point of view and as one can see by the rating there's a lot of people who enjoy this premise. Just try to keep that in mind.
Yay, your alive.
I was really hoping for this story to come back.
So in this universe humans are less like dogs and more like wolves?
Am I getting that right?