• Member Since 2nd Feb, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 9th, 2022

GhostWriter17


A simple writer with dreams of becoming something greater than himself. He vows to help those in need and be the best he can be. That is Ghost's mission. PM him for just about anything! He won't bite.

E

Celestia is at peace. Having just elected her student, Twilight Sparkle, to be a Royal Princess, she sits at the highest point in Canterlot, and contemplates her decisions in life. In a time she should be feeling joy and bliss, Celestia feels sorrow and pain. Why does she feel this way, and why now? That is what the Princess of the Sun tries to answer...

Companion Piece to my other poem, The Melancholy of Princess Luna: A Poem.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

I love this.

3555947 Aww thanks so much for that! I'm glad I could bring you joy! Your profile pic made it even better! :heart:

Love always and forever,
-Ghost

The rolling hills, glistening with the Sun's light

I'd eliminate the "the" in this line and just make it "glistering with Sun's light". Sounds more fluent^^

3562843 Ah-HA! Thank you for that, good friend! Your Profile Pic makes it look as if AJ is laughing at my little hiccup! :ajsmug:

Many thanks!

Love always and forever,
-Ghost

Comment posted by LunaUsesCaps deleted Jan 20th, 2020
Comment posted by GhostWriter17 deleted Jan 20th, 2020
Comment posted by LunaUsesCaps deleted Jan 20th, 2020
Comment posted by GhostWriter17 deleted Jan 20th, 2020

Haven't read a poem in a very long time. Great job, sir!:pinkiehappy:

3592054 Many thanks, friend, I am glad you liked it! To me, bringing someone the joy of reading is all I want. Happy travels to you!

Love always and forever,
-Ghost

Login or register to comment