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Purveyor of substandard horse-words since 2012. [they/them]
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Poor Mac.
He deserves to find that Special Somepony.
You need to expand upon this, the emotion is just so strong at the end.
That is why they took V-day out of schools. Stupid money making holiday involving kids in it with candy, V day is ok for adults but it can mess a kid up.
Volcanoes erupt even after being dormant, explode your feelings all over her Mac. Wait...
That came out wrong. 
Sorry... 
I am lovin Mac's character in this. Its so emotional. Moar please?
The people demand MORE!
simply amazing. i would like if you made more, but that is up to you.
Sad. But I think he's better suited to be with somepony other than Twilight - not because she's out of his league, mind you, it's just that Twilight strikes me as the sort who loves to engage in intellectual discussions. She gets really excited about the things she learns, and I think someone who shared her love of learning would be more right for her. 📖
Big Mac is a good-hearted, hardworking pony, but he's more about practical knowledge and their application in his particular field, while she just loves to learn about anything and everything and then get really enthused about it and its uses. Big Mac isn't very excitable, so I imagine she'd more often than not feel sad that he couldn't really share in her most close-held passion.
And then there's also something that is already evident in this story, which is that he feels dwarfed by her. She seems like this grand, accomplished princess hero, and he would likely see himself as her inferior rather than an equal providing her with love and a stable home life. There would always be that little voice in the back of his mind telling him that there are other stallions out there who could give her all that and share more in her interests.
Not saying it could never work, but I just don't think they'd be ideal for one another.
This was a well-written and engaging one-shot. I also appreciated the excellent grammar. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing.
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