Are you from the future? Then you're cordially invited to Pinkie's Time Traveller Party! Come as you are. No need to RSVP.
In 100 years, somepony in Ponyville will unearth a time capsule, and inside they'll find Pinkie's open invitation to her new friends whom she hasn't met yet because they're all in the future. Will any guests of honor show up to the party at the appointed hour? Pinkie's counting on it.
Inspired by an "experiment" by Stephen Hawking.
To be honest, this story was hard to read through, but once I finally had, I was pretty satisfied. I just hope there's more coming.
Well, this is going to be a riot.
I suppose it was inevitable that the only time traveler who wanted to show up at a Pinkie Pie party would be the one loopy enough to make the trial run of his time machine a Pinkie Pie party.
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Now that's an interesting start. Go, Pinkie !
Some typos I spotted :
And I think there's a word or two missing in those :
3089866 Yikes! Thanks for catching those. Fixed. I admit I may have been a little rushed in my proofing. Nothing like publishing to make those errors jump right at your face.
Watched, Thumbed Up, and Faved. It's very rare I do all of that to an incomplete story, keep it up!
So.
Tachyonic Rainboom?
I wonder what color that turns the sky.
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Octarine, perhaps?
*parks delorean.*
So... here I am. What's this? A party? FOR ME?! Well golly, looks like I'm going to have to phone a few friends. Let's see... fourth and tenth are in, maybe the eleventh? I'll see if Marty can bring Doc. Oh, and do you mind if Dr. Alexander Hartdegen tags along?
Thank you! Allons-y!
Hmm...Something seems just a teeny, tiny bit off
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That is all.
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Oooooops. Fixed. Thanks!
lolololol. That was good. I was cracking up when the second one popped up.
The egg became a focus point, didn't it?
This is amazing. Starred, Fingered. That sounded wrong.
Loving this so far.
Rhindle appears to be a Richard Collier expy, as well as a representative from the time travel romance subgenre. Do any of the other characters seem familiar?
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You're spot-on with Richard Collier. Love that movie. I assure you Rhindle's story will go in a somewhat different direction.
10 internets to anyone who can identify another red dragon named Rhindle. Without, y''know, looking it up first.
Hey im from the future!
err wait now its the past.
or is it the present?
Darn you Relativity of space time!!!
Uh oh, Twilight's future's just been spoiled! This could only lead to temporal trouble!
I just realized that Present Twilight was smirking when she heard about Pinkie's party, back in chapter 1. So, yeah, Natural Time's going to smooth this all over.
Somehow.
Darn if I don't want to see these characters bouncing off each other some more, though.
Heh. Spoilers are fun.
Ha ! That last line
Also :
I think there's a 'to' that shouldn't be here.
So . . . next chapter?
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I hate that I've had to leave this story hanging for so long. Things IRL have been remarkably eventful since October, including several theatre productions. Between rehearsals, performances, and other events, I haven't had time to give this story the serious attention it deserves.
I know exactly how this will end, and I'm anxious to get there, but right now, I simply cannot give any fair guarantee as to when I will have adequate time continue it. But rest assured, I've really enjoyed putting this together, and I want to see it continue just as much as you (hopefully) do.
To be continued…
Is that moose made of mousse?
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Nope, he's 100% moose moose.
So, wait. Twilight did something ill-advised and selfish with magic and it didn't immediately backfire?
Non-Canadian mooses! Interesting.
4106091 I don't know, the accent and the uniform (sounds like he's dressed like a Mountie) seem Canadian to me.
4111044 if there are ever moose on mlp they should be canadian
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It's lulling her into a false sense of security, waiting until she actually casts that amnesia spell before it all blows up in her face.
Well, I guess you'll have to tag this as Alternate Universe. Either that, or you can claim there was some sort of time frame in Season 4 where this story could've taken place. RIP Golden Oak Library.
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Yeah, this takes place sometime during Season Four. No need for an AU tag.
4105715 um moose? Ok so no ones traveled to the frozen south then how does that on donkey lady In MMMmystery on the friendship express make a mouse mousse in the first place? Because if I the mouse haven't been discovered yet then how can that happen? Unless there are mouse that live somewhere else.
4564372 Ponies have not yet reached the Frozen South, but they are aware of the existence of moose. Most ponies have never been to Zecora's homeland, yet zebras still wander their way into Equestira. Moose are just really rare.
4565333 ok I'll buy it
Like the time travelers, I'm a bit late to the party, but I have to say that this looks like an awesome premise, and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Ha, especially when one of them is 'Tuesday calamity' Twilight. That was a brilliant touch.