Pinkie Pie listens to her favourite song.
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Pen Brush
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Pretty interesting Penny. Can't wait to see how you make it out....
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sorry
I forgot to put it to complete
Very good! Very sad, too.
The end was stronger than the beginning.
3082810 What!! Not again Penny!! Please!!
Its amazing that you can turn a song full happiness and companionship to song filled with Despair and Loneliness, with just the right words
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I make really depressing one shots because I can't think of any happy one shot ideas
3082868
Well I know about those things and I get an idea for a sadfic and it goes full circle with depression. I hate sadfics because they make me depressed yet I can only make sad one shots. Plus I like to think about how Pinkie actually feels behind her smile and if she became mute.
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Yes it was. I meant for the end to be stronger then the beginning because the end is pretty much her breaking point and the end of the song.
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Not just that, your grammar, too.
3082912
what?
3082869 Well, why make one shots when you can craft an ingenious story I'm willing to give up to you? I have a few, and none of them are sad. What me to PM you a list of them?
3082884 yes
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Your grammar was better at the end than the beginning. At first, I was paying a lot of attention to the grammar, It wasn't so noticeable at the end.
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I guess I spelled stuff wrong?
3083074
Yeah, and some i's should be I's.
Pinkie should become a mime. Mimes make people happy.
It's okay.
It feels rushed for some reason, but I don't know how you'd alter the pacing considering you've bound yourself to a song.
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You've never comunicated with a mime, have you?
3083145>>3083675
Mimes don't make me happy, they annoy me. They pretty much ignore you.
3082968
sure
I thank you for this, this will most certainly help me with my fic's mute character.
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unless your mute character is an insane fourth wall breaking party thrower named Pinkie I don't know how I was helpful
3084571 Not quite, but her losing her voice was a huge blow to her. Her singing was one of the most important things to her.
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alright
Where's the music coming from? Her mind?
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I think one of her friends is singing it to her or its a song in her mind
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Holy crap I never thought I would make anypony cry with my stories
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your welcome...
....I'm really in the mood to write now after reading this....Great story!
(that's ironic)
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you can't even communicate with a mine now that I think about it...
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how is it ironic?
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Two words.
Sign Language
That kind of story always gets me. Good show._
>>Pen Brush Well that was super sad.. poor Pinkie Pie
Amazing!
Well, except the sad part.
Very interesting. This actually has more depth within it then I thought. When I read the description I was all like " Why is the picture so sad? " and then I read the story and i was all like,
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yes...it does. I like thinking about what sadness hides inside of a happy song and why she is so terrified and creepy in party of one when she thinks her friends abandoned her and what might happen if she were ever to go mute, and lose what made her happy, being able to make others happy.
Now that she had lost her voice, ponies look at her with sadness and smile at her to say they are sorry, not in pure happiness like she would have liked. She cant sing to anypony anymore and nothing is the same, and it makes her sad to here the song that made everypony so happy to have given her a parade and meet a new friend.
Well shit. This summarizes the depression in this fic.
I liked it. It felt rushed, but still enjoyable nonetheless.
/10
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Kind of hard to go slow while using a song, but I tried. Glad you liked it...and I somehow made you cry.
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You like it?
Yeah. I feel so sorry for Pinkie Pie. I can't imagine not being able to speak.
That'd be like me not being able to hear, so I can't DJ(my favorite thing).
So sad, yet so good at the same time.
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well, I am making a prequel for it, or at least try, so you can see how she got to this point.
Please do!
Well, that was....depressing
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Meant to be.
I hope the prequel to this story explains her voice-loss, for this story needs it. I like the premise, don't get me wrong. The presentation is nice, showing the sadness behind the smiles. (I got into this fandom because of Pinkamena-inspired art and writing, after all.) I'll give this an upvote, because I like what you have done so far.
Your story has been officially graded an...
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Emerald by the Gem Hunters.
Overall, it was unique. It took something as bright and colorful as the smile song, and made me depressed with it. Gotta say, definite achievement, considering that is what I believe your intended goal was.
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Yep! I feel horrible now...
3762886 meh, don't worry about it. I can't say I like being sad without a good reason, but your work is still impressive, so I can deal.
it's complete, yet so short?