A routine resupply mission in the war against Equestria goes wrong as the helicopter is shot down. Injured and stranded in the middle of enemy territory, the pilot must find a way to stay alive, and if possible, escape.
(Testing the waters with this. Constructive criticism is always appreciated!)
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So, what started the war... do the ponies see humans as slaves or did humanity flat out attack them?
I loved the imagery, and I don't just mean the senses. I actually felt the desparation, the confusion, the hesitation, and a bunch of other emotions. You conveyed the emotional conflict so well, and in such a dense little package. Nice work, Antei, and thank you for writing / publishing this. ^^
Brohoof! /)
Bravo, I like it
Is this going to be like a whole universe in another story or just stay as a one shot?
-Clay the Draconequus
3657681
Are those the only two possibilities that you can come up with?
What if Humans saw ponies as slaves, or Ponies just flat out attacked them?
Definitely enjoyed the read! Keep it up
3660033
do you know where I got "ponies enslaving humans from?"
3660470
Eh, could be exaggeration.
Thank you for your comments everyone! I'm happy that people are liking this!
3660470 I'll admit that I was originally going for the ability to use magic to read minds. One of my personal ideas for this universe is that, even though it's very rarely practiced and very painful, mind reading/control is possible. So it doesn't matter if you're willing to help or not. You'll always be helpful in the end. Human slaves wasn't my main focus, but I guess it could be interpreted that way.
3658029 I haven't planned anything else with this universe yet, although I think I could develop other stories from it. I have the universe fleshed out: my writing ability is the main factor holding me back.