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The Reformation of Discord

Discord is now reformed but the Mane Six never needed to lift a hoof after their first confrontation with him so what made him change and, more importantly, why is he roaming free around Equestria at night when no one's awake?

That's right this is the story to what it was that caused Discord to change without the need of the Mane Six...well at least without ALL six of them ready to turn him to stone with the Elements of Harmony.

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Fury of the Tempest

Fury of the Tempest #1 · Sep 12th, 2013 · · ·

Having spaces between the paragraphs makes things a lot easy to read...

And slow down the pacing, everything is happening too fast. Slow down a bit, and try to show people what is happening, instead of simply 'telling' them. You get across a lot more that way.

TheHollowSpectrum

TheHollowSpectrum #2 · Sep 13th, 2013 · · ·

3191309 Thank you for the advice! This is actually my very first ever fanfiction and really just story in general I've really wanted to get into the works of an author but I don't have any real experience but thanks a ton! Advice is definitely what I need right now so I can make this fic as enjoyable as possible along with all my future ones!