Several days after her visit to the human world Lyra talks Twilight into tricking the portal to the human world into thinking that thirty moons has come early however the spell she performs on the portal doesn't work the way she expects it to as Bronies and Pegasisters from both The Hidden Leaf Village and Hidden Sand Village are teleported to Equestria however Kabuto, Orichimaru and The Akatsuki are all also teleported there as well, it looks like Equestria is in for quite a adventure.
Chapters (11)
Brony ninjas?
Don't they need televisions in that universe for bronies to exist?
Also you'll never learn will you?
Oy, this guy.
Ninja bronies....? !areyoukiddingme! .....Thats IT! I'm out-a-here.
Nope.avi
THE GRAMMAR,IT BURNS!
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Pfft.
This is so shit.
It's so funny. More.
I... I have no idea what's going on.
3158861 3158862 http://i.imgur.com/MHuW96t.gif stupid website is stupid and wont let me put a gif..
3156691 yes yes it does.
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3300556 Also quite appropriate.
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Holy...
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This this
Is horrible but I feel the need to continue
You genius has trapped me
Just finished this chapter now my head hurts from the horrible story telling and random scene jumps
I must see what happens next I will not loose faith in this story
Short and still horrible story telling and gramar
Why coupdnt tou actually include the fight scene
Faith Is slowly dying
Why am I continuing
This chapter wasnjustna straight up less epic copy of the real fight
This has got to be the worst story I ever read
It's just re-telling the naruto shippuden story arc with ponies
Have a
Okay getting better but still less epic and you skipped so much of the fight
My faith in this story has completely shattered
So has my sanity
Well here we are again. It always been such a pleasure. Remember how this story killed me twice. Oh how I laughed and laughed. Except I wasn't laughing. But all the while I've been shockingly nice. Is this even a story. What I had been reading is just a short recap of Naruto only with ponies who have no real role in the story.
3300556 I concur
Now this doesn't make any sense. Equestria has nothing to do with Sasuke's revenge. It makes no sense at all for him to want to destroy it.
4514973 It's because Hidden Leaf ninja reside there and since he has no way of going back to Planet Earth this is what I came up with.
4515226 Hmm will celestia get a kirin shoved up her plot
4515477 I don't know I haven't thought that far ahead.
My faiths already dead
Im just gonna stop reading this
That’s it. I’m outta here,
This is need more...Real stic.
this is ... I don't even know whether or not I should leave or continue reading
I will give it one more chance if it sucks I am leaving
you had your chance and you blew it. see ya
I don't even know if I should attempt this story. The like/dislike ratio and the comments seem to be telling me something.