Cox:My Little Scrubs!? What an original title! It's- it's like combining My Little Pony and a completely different show into one seamless title! Nobody has ever done that before! Gen-i-us! Must've taken all night to come up with that one, eh big boy? Bets on how long before this is abandoned? Anyone? I've got 5 bits on this lasting three chapters. I know, I know, that's a bit generous, buuuuuut I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt here.
.... Thanks, Dr. Cox. Anyway, Sacred Heart is a hospital filled to the brim with quirky workers, from the daydreaming sensitive doctor JD to the lawyer sad sack Ted. But when the hospital gets a certain purple pony and her dragon as patients, it opens the floodgates for even more crazy to be let in.
Well, this is going to be my effort to combine two of my favorite shows, Scrubs and My Little Pony. Problem is, I don't know any medicine! 
So please, along with the usual constructive criticism, please throw out any medicine problem you know, pony, human, or otherwise!
first poast
FIRST POST
I can't wait to see how you put the Janitor into here.
you had me at the cover art
ill will be tracking this one
'What has four hooves and doesn't give a crap?'
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I can't wait for Dr Jan Itor. This has made me want to rewatch Scrubs, it's been years! Awesome work, very funny!
You, sir, deserve an award. Imagined it in my head exactly like how Scrubs played out. You seemed to flawlessly capture Dr. Cox's rant mode and everything! I FUCKING LOVE SCRUBS! Anyway, awesome job!
252787 Thank you, and may I say I love your name? It cracked me up when it said Everypony is tracking My little Scrubs. If only.
And Dr. Cox is my favorite character, so I really wanted to get him right. Thanks again!
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The Janitor will be fun to write, for sure. And @determamfidd, I just got into the series lately, but it quickly became one of my favorites thanks not only to the comedy, but to the heart underneath. I can't wait till I finish, come back to it years later, and reexperience the magic.
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That prank was hilarious. Plus, it gives a bit of context for the fic, so I think that's a good reason to post it.
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When I saw the summary for this, I was worried. Oh God, what the fuck is that?! I thought. Well, here we go...
And then I read the story. Magnificent dialogue--occasionally punctuated with imperfections in wording and characterization--and the perfect J.D. You have Scrubs down pat. I don't know how you're going to integrate ponies into what you have going on effectively, but if Twi is any indication, you're going to be fine. I'm not partial to all the real-world references, but that's more of a personal thing.
Excellent job. I've been wanting to see this for a long time, and I wasn't disappointed.
252987 Thank you, I'm glad I'm doing the show justice. Can you be a little more specific with the wording and characterization problems? Both of those are terrible problems of mine, and I'd like to fix them as quickly as possible.
Oh, part of it's the I thens, isn't it? Dang, should've caught that.
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It's hard to pinpoint, because they aren't big problems. Just those moments when you read something and give a little half-frown because it didn't feel quite right. I'll try to see what I can find be re-analyzing it in an hour for so. Taking a break usually helps before rereading a story as far as finding errors goes. Maybe read the chapter aloud and see what strikes you as off...
LET ME LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
253038 Thanks. While praise is always good and keeps you going, constructive criticism is just as helpful. I'll try that.
Me: *daydreaming about a Scrubs-like episode of MLP* If only
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That was my exact thought when I noticed this Fic thank you good sir for reading my mind and making my dreams come true
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Later.
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That would be an awesome parody episode if MLP actually used the Scrubs format. If only...
Holy Crap! It's like its made by the same people who did the good episodes of the actual show!!
uhmmmm....
KEEP ON GOING, I'M ROOTING FOR YOU!!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR JD'S FIRST "OUT-OF-IT" DAYDREAM!
*ahem* More please!
252987 By real-world references, do you mean the real world references or the names? Because while I understand people who don't like the references, they are a big part of Scrubs. If you're talking about the names, good point. I'd love to ponify their names, but I'm not clever enough for that. But then again, it's kinda late, so maybe I can think of something in the morning. Still, I'd love to hear suggestions on ponyfied versions of the cast's names from anyone with an idea.
I mean like the Twilight and the Judy Blume references. They feel like they don't belong in the pony world. I can see all this happening on Earth, but when you make references like that, I can't see it happening in Equestria. I KNOW references are a big part of Scrubs, and it'd be a hard problem to solve, but I'd give it some thought, at least.
Combing Scrubs and MLP interesting.
Here's hoping Cox loses that bet.
Good luck Hoof.
*Smack*
and before anyone else can say it
Betrayal Hoof.
253193 I shall. Maybe pony puns would help. guess I'll see what happens. Thanks again for the constructive criticism!
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Everypony was kung-fu fighting...
252987 Sorry, last thing, I swear, but what's wrong with the summary?
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It seemed like it was very forced and stilted when I read it. It may have just been my pessimistic mind at the time exaggerating its problems, because it isn't as bad as I remember it being, but it still feels forced and stilted.
Quite a few errors with syntax, but damn it this was funny!
253276 Eh, I see your point, but on the other hand, it is a unique way to draw people in. I'd probably like to hear other people's thoughts before I ax that.
253277 Please elaborate. Wanna fix as much errors as I can!
As for medical issues you mentioned in your description, how's about
The trots
Hay fever
Cutie Pox (Mutated strain)
Just a few off the top of my head. Anyways it's Scrubs and ponies. Neither show calls for details on that sort of thing, well at least in my opinion.
Please continue, or I'll give you a four story atomic wedgy
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I love the idea, of course. It's just the execution that bothered me a little bit. You don't have to get rid of it, but you might consider reworking it a tad.
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There is an instance of an endquote followed directly by a period with no space like this ". and you have a hanging end quote at the end of the fic.
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Oooh, a mutated Cutie Pox strain. Sounds deadly and serious! I like that idea. The trots and Hay fever... Don't get me wrong, I love horse puns as much as the next guy, but occasionally they ruin the seriousness of the moment.
253314 Yeah, I'll do that. Probably tomorrow.
253333 Dang, should've caught those. Thanks!
I think I'm gonna like this
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I've edited the story and added one fantasy in My Little Crush.
Also cleaned up some grammar mistakes and vocabulary. Please, all of you tell me what you think!
This is either going to be the best or the worst story ever, but bet all my bits on best. Tracking
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I like the edit. Nice work, slipping that in there. With a Scooby Doo style dog speech & biscuits to boot! Clever.
I await Chapter 2!
New chapter up, along with some major edits in the previous chapters. Now I have a plan for Twilight's condition, and what crazy mishaps the other 5 will go through.
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Because that was magical.
I could not find a single error with how anything was worded. The dialogue for every single pony was perfect. Nothing sticks out as bad, not even a LITTLE bit.
Awesome. Awesome. Awesome.
D'AAAAWW SPIKE
Such a worried little cutie
259901>>259993 Wow. Thank you. I was worried about this chapter, but apparently I was just being pessimistic.
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Incredibly pessimistic. I love how you don't shy away from any character in either universe. And it's good, because you pull each and every one off perfectly. That FUCKING Janitor scene, guy. THAT SCENE.
So yeah, don't be pessimistic.
he kept up with pinkie HES THE ONE
Tracked so hard!!
260279 First I was worried I was making him too plain, but then I remembered how Neil Flynn ad libbed a lot of his lines and that was why the Janitor was so funny. So I just went with what popped into my head.
Side note, I just noticed all three of these chapters' word counts end in 6. 666. THIS FIC IS CURSED.
Not anymore though. Darn you edits!
Why didn't you write season 9 of Scrubs? Because you're doing a better job of it than the writers. I swear to God, sir, you are gonna get Trope'd one day.
260500 I can only hope i'll get on TVTropes. And I've never seen Season 9 and I do not plan to. I've spent 8 seasons getting attached to the cast, I'm not going to sit through a new one that lasted for one season and that pretty much everyone agrees sucked.
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Well, if you want my personal opinion, I watched Season 9 just for the brief parts with the original cast. I didn't care much about the new guys. They're just trying to copy the original characters, and that isn't going that good.
Anyway, about the story, a simple word. Wow.
Keep this on, you're making an amazing job! Even if you've "Mary Sue'd" JD a bit, it's okay.
I mean, he's JD. He needs to be the coolest guy ever.
You've made a perfect job with the other characters as well. Everyone seemed in-character to me. And, no sign of grammatical errors whatsoever.
Totally tracking! Want to see where the JDxTwi will go!
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I was worried about JD becoming a Mary Sue, but don't worry. Every time he got too big for his britches, was the cock of the walk, and did everything perfectly on the show, it wasn't too long before the Janitor and/or the hospital brought him down, and that will definitely happen here.
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Can't wait to see that! Also, you've got a message.
You've got writing touching moments down to a tee. And, in the Scrubs spirit, you had someone come along to fail at ruining it, in this case, The Todd.
Todd's just lucky that it was Rarity that took action here and not Applejack or Rainbow Dash neither of them would have been as kind as she was.
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Yeah, I wanted to keep in the Scrubs tradition where a touching moment has some humor added to it, but the humor only heightens the touchingness. Glad that worked.
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I can just imagine RD and/or AJ chasing him across the whole hospital. The Todd will be making further appearances, so who knows?
The Todd brohoof /)