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ElkinFencer10


Um, hi. I'm Stephen, though a lot of the time (especially in gaming), I go by Church. I teach high school history and collect video games from all eras and consoles.

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Discord returns mere months after the Mane Six defeated him in Ponyville, but this time, he doesn't come back to wreak more havoc. Instead, he only wants to talk to Twilight.

Takes place between the Season 2 finale and the Season 3 premiere.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 13 )

Short but sweet, I liked it! :twilightsmile: If I were to make one recommendation though, it would be that you check the first paragraph as the spacing seems to have derped out a little :derpytongue2: Other than that, I can't really fault this. My only complaint is that there isn't more.

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Yeah, I wrote it in Google Docs. I try to de-derp it as much as I could, but I had somewhere to be, so I'll look at it again and try to fix some of that. It was the paragraph that gave me trouble right from the start in terms of formatting. Thanks for reading and for the comment! :twilightsmile:

I like it for what it is, but honestly... it sounds like it should be part of something bigger.

It would work perfectly as the first chapter in a story (since now Twilight has to figure out what happened and we have a ticking time bomb mechanic in place).

If not the beginning of a new story, it could be tied to another story as a side chapter (like Reforging the Blade if you plan on having Discord be a part of it in the future).

I just see a lot of potential here past what it's presented.

Your choice though, nothing wrong with leaving people wanting more.

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I only planned it as a one-shot, but I wanted to leave myself a venue in case I decide in the future that I do want to do more with it.

3081575 agreed! This seems like the start of something big.

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Haha, if I get many more of these comments, I might not have a choice but to write more. :pinkiehappy:

Well now I want to know what this big plan is.:rainbowhuh:

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I suppose I'll have to write a sequel, then.

3223693 I thought that too.
I was saddened when it turned out Discord wasn't a genie for any of the Mane Six.

3185131 Have you written the sequel yet? Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

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I always planned to write a sequel, but I haven't gotten around to it. Not sure I will. Life's super busy when you teach high school. >_<

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