It was all supposed to be happy right? Luna comes back and lives happily ever after. But after the reaction she gets from nearly a decade, she understands she is not wanted. She will have her revenge
It was all supposed to be happy right? Luna comes back and lives happily ever after. But after the reaction she gets from nearly a decade, she understands she is not wanted. She will have her revenge
first real attempt at a story, constructive criticism is welcome.
Nice story, well written, i liked it. I could see a lot of potential as a series, however. A bit of time, a chapter or two before this, some more details in this one and it could be a very nice series of stories. Still very nice, though. I enjoyed it very much. javascript:smilie('');