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Day of Fire

It was all supposed to be happy right? Luna comes back and lives happily ever after. But after the reaction she gets from nearly a decade, she understands she is not wanted. She will have her revenge

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dafiltafish

dafiltafish #1 · Feb 23rd, 2012 · · ·

first real attempt at a story, constructive criticism is welcome.

Ujack

Ujack #2 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

Nice story, well written, i liked it. I could see a lot of potential as a series, however. A bit of time, a chapter or two before this, some more details in this one and it could be a very nice series of stories. Still very nice, though. I enjoyed it very much. javascript:smilie('');