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Silver is your average pony, works in a space station, feeling everyday has the same routine. But when aliens attack Silvers humble station, will Silver uncover the secrets of his brother Emeralds' death..?

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MagneticMind

MagneticMind #1 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

Several problems with grammar and wording in some areas but other then that, it seems pretty good. I like it.

A Sassy Vulture

A Sassy Vulture #2 · Feb 24th, 2012 · · ·

I love the concept, Alien is one of my favorite franchises. But, the beginning was a bit over-rushed. The alien attack started in the first few paragraphs, I am not saying that is a problem, I dislike slow fics, but it would be better if you contextualised more with it, to give the characters more background.

Awesome story though, consider it tracked! :D

SirAiy