• Published 3rd Mar 2012
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Her Whole Darn Heart - Crowley



Can humans and ponies fall in love? A human is torn between right and wrong when he finds Applejack.

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Faved and Tracked for later reading. But since it's your stuff Crowley, I am sure to enjoy it.

HOLY SHIT its finally here!

Yesyesyesyesyes!:twilightsmile:

Buck yeah, another Crowley fic. :yay:

Bravo. Just bravo, Crowley. There's a shortage of good HiE romance stories (at least, ones where the human is normal and not a Mary Sue type character who solves everyponies problems). I can gladly say this is one of the better ones.
I hope you'll write some more in the future, I look forward to your next works.

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With the ponies in the show, it wouldn't be Zoophilia. It would be Xenophilia.

Bravo Crowley! Another great story as usual!:pinkiehappy:

Bravo Bravo good sir! The realism and the emotion was tangible, the pacing was great, and the finish was beautiful.

If I could give stars, I would say 5/5.

But instead, enjoy my thumb in an upward position! (that... doesn't sound strange at all right?)

:moustache:
I can't get enough of this stuff.

Cr0wley, mi amigo - if you wish, I can add this to the Human In Equestria group.
Just say the word.

Not a fan of HiE stories but dammit Crowley I love your stories so I have to read it

I'm pretty sure if you've read Crowley's stories and don't have a pony fetish by now, something is wrong with you.

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If you think it belongs there, go right ahead!

Thanks for all the kind words so far everyone! It's made my day! :ajsmug:

Dude, I only have one issue with your fics and that is that they are all well written. I mean the shear amount of reader interaction with things like pictures and off panel documents make these stories great. I judge a fic on it own merits. I don't have a lot of respect for people who write clop, but when a Crowley fic goes up, I know it's just not going to be some kinda stupid sick wish fulfillment scenario. There is emotion, continuity, humor, and plausible character interaction. Those are all the things you would find in a good story regardless of content rating.

Here's a gif for a job well done.
chzbronies.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-i-just-dont-know-what-went-wrong.gif

Peace Out.

Excellent work. I'll leave a comment here in the hopes that it helps this story get on the Featured Bar.

Can't wait for your other works!

*Sigh* you got me I'll track it.

congratulations on a great fic.

Mrrrraaaauwww :3

Amazing!!:pinkiehappy:

"You might now have a pony fetish."
Old news dude. Loved this. :twilightsmile:

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^^^Pretty much this. The problem with the Zoophilia definition assumes there is no other intelligent life than humans. Read or watch any Scifi novel or movie/tv show that has or implies humans gettin'it'on with an intelligent species resembling an animal we have on Earth. Doesn't make sense to apply Zoophilia. Its why furry porn doesn't fall under that either.

Ah Crowley. The usual customary praise, et. cetera, et. cetera.

I'm just wondering where you get your vectors. Are they all custom-made? They really do add a lot to the 'fic.

Oh yeah, review. Very well told.I'm glad this story includes the whole species barrier and goes through all that very very realistically while telling a love story. Good show, chap!

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Some are from the MLP VectorClub on DA, where they are free for use, others are edited from said pics. For example the sad Big Mac pic was orginally him smiling, I edited that myself. Also the one with Twilight and Applejack in the emotional library scene was a mix of three vectors I put together myself (AJ, Twi and the library background I added with a hint of blur), not to mention actual screencaps like Spike getting hurt in Feeling Pinkie Keen. Whatever image conveys the message across, I guess!

Wow...wow...wow

That's all I can keep saying, Crowley!


The sheer amount of philosophy applied is just amazing in the story. The concept of a human and a pony loving each other is handled perfectly, with the moral questioning perfectly applied and done in a way where it's realistic. I've seen many "human in Equestria" fics handle this horribly, but you absolutely NAILED IT! The humanity involved and thinking is truly deep, and the imagination of it and sheer philosophy shows how this concept can be handled!

I loved how this concept is extremely controversial in so many ways. After all, the idea of an animal and human having...relations is just deemed immoral in the world this character comes from. This is just wonderfully explored in the story, showing how love truly doesn't have any barriers to it. It's inspirational, controversial, but done in a way that it's imaginative AND beautifully-executed! The thoughts expressed are genius as well! Never have I expected this out of a subject like...bestiality. Once again, even THIS is glanced upon, and you STILL do well with it!


When I talked to you a while back, I told you I expected great stuff. Buddy, you FAR surpassed my expectations! This story was simply beautiful, and I won't let my morals convince me otherwise! WONDERFUL story, Crowley!

I simply CANNOT wait for your next story!

... BS. Why the HELL don't I want to be a pony as well?! I CALL B. *ING SHENANIGANS!

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She can't; the spell can only work on whatever species it's listed for. And since humans didn't exist in Equestria before now, the spell clearly won't be able to work on humans. It's why Twilight tells Applejack it's irriversible.

Normally, I don't get all excited over clopfiction.

Normally, those writers aren't Crowley.

EDIT: Great story, great continuity, great author, dammit Crowley.

That's about everything, there.

I'm keeping this reveiw short and sweet :eeyup:
10/10.
Literally, a perfect story.

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In my eyes, this ain't a clopfic.
Its a one-shot with a sex scene.
I've only ever read one story that contained any sort of sex, And that one was written by Crowley.
(Which was not this fic btw, I've decided to skip that scene on this one.
The fics called 'Spreading your wings and her's' I think it was called.
And surprisingly it was pretty good. Even though I hesitated for about an hour before I finally
decided to read it that scene. (And it was honestly not that 'graphic' compared to what it COULD have been.) :twilightblush:)

Crowleys fic's always contain a few things that clopfic's don't:
Story. Character Development, emotion and an actual good reason for the more intimate moments.:twilightblush:
Rather than the usual sick drivel of:
"X meet Y, Y meet X, Now buck."
"Huh? But why?"
"Oh, cause, why the buck not?" :twilightoops:

Another great chapter.
And a life lesson (Don't judge a person by their looks, or by their ethnicity), wow! Two for the price of one!

Brilliant! we need more like theses! :pinkiehappy:

Bloody good fic mate and like a few others have said i dont usually go for clop fics but this one was extremely good :eeyup:

first off ima gonna call you mr crowley, non debatable. secondly this is win.:rainbowkiss:

Crowley, Equestria's largest source of fetishes, eh? Keep up the good wok man. :yay:

Crowley, this fic is perhaps one of the best fics I've read so far, the details, added pictures here and there, and it feels all so real! The way you put the fear of bestiality in here is actually quite rare, in fact, I might wanna try to aim for this somewhere in my own fic. your an inspiration, and I hope you have plenty more gifts to show for us, your fans.

A big fan, Graham the Brony.:pinkiehappy:

Wow. I really can't find any good HiE stories. Then there's this masterpiece.:moustache:

Interesting to see Applejack end up with the human for once, most HiE fics I see are for Twilight Sparkle. Since, you know, she's the magically inclined one and spends the most time with the human. I don't read a ton of HiE stories, but this one was certainly very good. You really would worry about things like beastiality, philosophy of love over species, how the rules of Equestria were different compared to Earth's. Its an interesting set of rules to examine, much less with such a talented writer like yourself. It takes a lot to be thought-provoking in a fan fiction, much less a MLP fan fiction. You've definitely got the gift. I hope you write more in the near future. Cheers! :pinkiehappy:

(BEFORE READING)
I'm gonna be honest, all of my basic instincts are telling me to run screaming in the opposite direction. But, I'm seeing a lot of positive comments and such, and I am nothing if not fair (usually), so let's take a look.
(AFTER READING)
Okay, certainly glad I did that. It was a good story. Little short, but well-written and characterized. I'll be honest, I completely skipped the steamy part. But that didn't detract from the story in any big way, and that's certainly the sign of a good writer, at least in my opinion.

Damn it, why are your stories so GOOD!
You just make me favorite every one!
:facehoof:

Crowley, you've done it again you clever writer you :raritywink:
As its been said before, you most certainly perfectly captured how any normal person would react in that situation :twilightsmile:
And besides that, the rest of the story is full of your top notch writing and those little sweet shots of extra immersion with the images and vectors :pinkiesmile:
And also Id like to point out one thing " (the idea of plugging an “Eggs Box” into a “Tee-vee” and playing it still befuddles her) " This had me :yay::yay::yay: 'ing so much because I too play an " Eggs Box" :pinkiehappy:
But besides that fanboyism, Once again another fantastic work by yourself, keep on writing! :pinkiehappy:

Blazes crowley another win in fics, good job on the overcomin species barrier bit too, made it more realistic.:rainbowkiss:

Yeah my comment on chapter 7 still stands. Of 'course why wouldn't it? That was daaaaaaaaaamn good. You, have earned yet another of my little favorite stars.

Keep it up man! :ajsmug:

haven't even started reading and i'm already started tracking.

Okay, who the *censored* disliked?!:flutterrage:

287603 If they can feel like humans, think like humans, talk like humans, and do stuff like humans then I think it's downright natural.

No, just no.
Humans do not breed or fall in love with animals.
This man needs to be taken away and placed in a re education camp.
And now to read it.
Good day.:moustache:

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Funny, that's EXACTLY the point made in the story.


I suppose someone missed the point...d'oh!:rainbowlaugh:

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I quick read it.
Now to read it normaly.
Good day.:moustache:

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