one if the main reasons i love your fic is that the human you character doesn't just drop all morals of our world the second they enter equestria. so many other fics just leave the mental blocks of a human and a pony out of the equation.
Very good deconstruction... Not a detailed, full-blown deconstruction, but it succeeds as both a HiE story and a fresh new take on an oft poorly executed story type. Basically, great job!
I can guess what she'll ask. 293337 Yup, something like that. I wonder if he's going to leave in the morning. I'd not be able to stand staying after that. And no, not because I'd be afraid that Big Mac might break my spine for it...though that COULD be a very real possibility.
I'm sad for Applejack and I'm sad for the guy. Having something wonderful but your instincts stop you, scream at you that you are doing something wrong, that's gotta hurt and Applejack, oh poor Applejack.
This chapter was a pain to read! I love Crowley's work but I was arguing with my own thought process! "She's a horse!" The text says. *punch* "SHUT THE HELL UP! I'M OKAY WITH THIS!"
This is where we enter an existential conundrum. God made humans alone in his image, and he has issues with even letting us date outside of our nations, let alone species. This is undefined and VERY theoretical territory on the basis that we are the only sapient species in our universe (at least as of yet known) and on top of that, conception would be impossible.
Seeing AJ in that pic broke my heart (clutches chest) even before MLP I was an avid fan of sentient non humans I didn't really contimplate long in order for me to know that.. for myself race species gender it never mattered to me in the least I knew that if they could share there heart with me why can't I share my heart with them? Mental barrier? Tch I don't think I had any to begin with so when I see people in HIE fics not bothered in loving another sentient being I can relate to it cuz I too care little of the form. And more on the heart and damn does this mare have heart!
There don't seem to be as many pictures this time around.........
Okay, so either humanization, or ponification. I'm hopping for ponification, but one that he can turn off if they find where he arrived. And turn back on when ever he comes back.
You've addressed the social and personal stigmas quite nicely, not like EVERY OTHER FREAKIN' ONE that more or less says 'I'm just gonna screw anything with legs and lady parts in this world 'cause they'll inexplicably let me, reservations stemming from 20+ years of human nature be damned'. I like it.
2315095 so uh, I know how stupid it is that I'm replying to a comment that was posted more than half of a year ago, but I just can't ignore the fact that every comment I see by you is exactly what's going through my head before I read it. Just wanted to say thank you... in a really creepy stalkery way. In fact, I'll start the actual stalking now.
2315095 All of this ^^^ It's so easily brushed off in other stories. Kudos to you for actually giving this the attention it rightly deserves and by extension, caused so many feels.
Hm.....how long since his arrival in Equestria again?
It's either adapting to the environment or being alone for the rest of your life. I suppose the choice is obvious. The possibility of a relationship with another race than my own would probably be one of the first things for me to think about.
It's still refreshing to see this topic not being swished under the carpet for once
got a bad feeling about what shes gonna ask
one if the main reasons i love your fic is that the human you character doesn't just drop all morals of our world the second they enter equestria. so many other fics just leave the mental blocks of a human and a pony out of the equation.
Well that was dramatic.
Oh shit. And here comes the transformation spell.
quote from skyrim
Lydia: "i got a baaaaad feeling about this......."
man why didnt he just tell her how he felt before and just let it happen?
Tears? Fuck no, just gagging and feeling sad.... I would never run out on AJ with all her friends around! Much less shove her.
yea well i see the idea but y'know its just whatever SMASHING GOOD READ THO do not misinterpret my words
Applejack Wat chu be askin twilight
Who wouldn't want to kiss this beautiful creature?
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Oh jeez I hope this turns around quickly ...
and I could never run out on Apple Jack I'm too accepting
AY take applejack kiss anyday homi
Aw, shit's 'bout ta get real!
There's only one way out...
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this is giving me many feels now.
Applejack: “Twilight, there’s somethin’ I’ve gotta ask of you. It’s important.”
Twilight: Sure, what's up, Applejack?
Applejack: I need you to turn me into a human. Just for a short while.
Twilight: Um, I don't know-Ack! *green hoof hooks itself around her*
Lyra: Step aside, Sparky, this is my area of expertise!
293337
And thats how Equestria was made!
...
Somehwere, Lyra just got hot and bothered
Very good deconstruction... Not a detailed, full-blown deconstruction, but it succeeds as both a HiE story and a fresh new take on an oft poorly executed story type.
Basically, great job!
I can guess what she'll ask.
293337
Yup, something like that.
I wonder if he's going to leave in the morning. I'd not be able to stand staying after that. And no, not because I'd be afraid that Big Mac might break my spine for it...though that COULD be a very real possibility.
you know i wouldn't mind a kiss from applejack besides she not he same as a earth pony
and if i was that guy i would feel ashamed of my self
DONT KISS THE HORSE LOL
I'm sad for Applejack and I'm sad for the guy. Having something wonderful but your instincts stop you, scream at you that you are doing something wrong, that's gotta hurt and Applejack, oh poor Applejack.
“Why are you cryin’ outside the bathroom Applejack? Is somepony in there and you really need to go?”
ROFL!!!!
Oh, no. No no no no. What have I done?
I love yuu crowly
there is not a faint tear down my eye there is not...a....tear!.(sniffle*)
I'm a dick apparently.
289583 That is an earth horse. Not an Equestrian pony. One is an animal the other is a sapient intelligent race.
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I think I could kiss that.
This chapter was a pain to read! I love Crowley's work but I was arguing with my own thought process! "She's a horse!" The text says. *punch* "SHUT THE HELL UP! I'M OKAY WITH THIS!"
I'm such a bastard...even thought i, personaly, probably would have said something different.
Really awesome so far!
714325 I could kiss that, as long as Big Mac doesn't try to de-spine me and re-spine me with apple cores.
This is where we enter an existential conundrum. God made humans alone in his image, and he has issues with even letting us date outside of our nations, let alone species. This is undefined and VERY theoretical territory on the basis that we are the only sapient species in our universe (at least as of yet known) and on top of that, conception would be impossible.
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''Twilight I need a penis, someone deserves a butthurt''
Seeing AJ in that pic broke my heart (clutches chest) even before MLP I was an avid fan of sentient non humans I didn't really contimplate long in order for me to know that.. for myself race species gender it never mattered to me in the least I knew that if they could share there heart with me why can't I share my heart with them? Mental barrier? Tch I don't think I had any to begin with so when I see people in HIE fics not bothered in loving another sentient being I can relate to it cuz I too care little of the form. And more on the heart and damn does this mare have heart!
There don't seem to be as many pictures this time around.........
Okay, so either humanization, or ponification. I'm hopping for ponification, but one that he can turn off if they find where he arrived.
And turn back on when ever he comes back.
If it has sapient intelligence, go for it champ! If not, NO!
You've addressed the social and personal stigmas quite nicely, not like EVERY OTHER FREAKIN' ONE that more or less says 'I'm just gonna screw anything with legs and lady parts in this world 'cause they'll inexplicably let me, reservations stemming from 20+ years of human nature be damned'. I like it.
HNNNNNG
he is no nice one
seriously? stupid human emotions.
2315095 so uh, I know how stupid it is that I'm replying to a comment that was posted more than half of a year ago, but I just can't ignore the fact that every comment I see by you is exactly what's going through my head before I read it. Just wanted to say thank you... in a really creepy stalkery way. In fact, I'll start the actual stalking now.
Uh... Why do you still like him if he's being so shallow?
3920649 Easier said than done when trying to force back a lifetime of being taught NOT to love something non-human. Give him some slack
2315095
All of this ^^^
It's so easily brushed off in other stories. Kudos to you for actually giving this the attention it rightly deserves and by extension, caused so many feels.
Geez. This is heart wrenching.
All I have to say is
Hm.....how long since his arrival in Equestria again?
It's either adapting to the environment or being alone for the rest of your life. I suppose the choice is obvious.
The possibility of a relationship with another race than my own would probably be one of the first things for me to think about.
It's still refreshing to see this topic not being swished under the carpet for once
Finally I read this scenario. I can't say how much crap I've read without even addressing this issue. Reality increased to 7. Immersion +12.